This story was awesome!

0.0 ... makes me what to change the world and fix this gov. slag.

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That was adorable, actually... Not sure why - I think well-written Sari-centric stuff might just be cute by default. XD

Thought-provoking, too... ponders

Cute and better than the actual show. You are a true artist at world building.

Hi,

A very good view of the affects of the Robot Revolution. I've lived in Detroit, so I was interested in how the economy was changed in the cartoon.

Interesting perspective and I love the way it was written.

A very good idea for a one-shot. Nobody really thinks about these sort of things, but it makes sense that the robotic revolution would also have such negetive effects on individuals. It's pretty disasterous if the job pool shrinks so incredibly rapidly while the *population* remains the same.

I really liked how Kevin kept having to stop himself from swearing out loud in front of a little kid. Sari was spot-on, in how she tried to defend the robotic revolution and, by extention, her dad.

To quote Prowl..."Impressive."

Very good fic, and Kevin is definitely intriguing. I like Prowl a lot in this, especially deciding he owes it to the humans to help them and Kevin wondering why Sari doesn't know anything about the lost jobs.

For the first few paragraphs, I had no idea what this was about. Then I remembered the episodes I've caught a few times in the early hours. This was solid little piece. Good OC design, but then again, you do have some considerable experience with such things. Nice show. Keep on updating.