Loved it!

ok I cant read anymore of this shit. Edward Cullen...22 is the most dangerous man in America...and probably the world?

Ya right. Your writing is amazingly juvinille. Edward is BARELY A MAN. And you just took that shit way too far...most dangerous man in the world, what a joke.

are you gonna pull out all of the usual suspects? Most eligible bachelor….. so fucking stupid

And does a 22 year old CHILD even count as a bachelor? Hes not exactly old enough to be marriage material

So Edward is a CEO of a large company and mafia boss...…..at age 22? Seriously? 22?

That's totally believable if the business is I don't know...selling shit on ebay or running a lemonade stand and hes the mafia boss of the fucking lolly pop crew.

The very least you could do is make it believable. And honestly? I would think that any woman would want her CEO and mafia boss to have some fucking wisdom and life experience and that shit only comes with age. Hes gotta be at LEAST 28.

Good on you Bella for giving Carlisle a little of what he deserved. When can we more, update, update please.

Wowhoooo, that was intense.

Oh dearie me, l didn't know Bella was that easy. But Carlisle of all people, chivers runs down my spine, where is Esme?

Yeeeeeee, Emmett and Jasper is here. Poor Edward everything seems to going against him at the moment.

Am hoping that Mike will be getting a right beating in the later chapters. Thanks loving it.

Great story and you atually did really good with your lemon :)

Such a good story! Wish you finished! Well done! What an emotional ride!

Loved the story-let me know if you write more.
thanks,

You have to continue this storyyyyyy pleeeeeeeeas! I loved every second of it! Greetings from Belgium xxx

Uhm, your story is kind of great, but if Edward was really the one that killed her father, I think she should stay far away no matter what. This is so fucked up, which is why I'm not gonna read it anymore. Still, your writing is great :)

this is all really good!