Hilarious ending! Hehe...

Haha! Very funny!

I never knew Clow like cakes so much

"The cake was gone" Haha that made me laugh becuase its like *gasp* !

great!

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i didnt think Clow had that much of a sweet tooth.

CUNSTUCTIVE CTRITISISM (SP?)

if you're going to use that for of kero-chans name, then i would spell it "Keroberos" OR if you want to use the manga translation, "Cerberus" would also work.

That was great, Clow's such a child-he's as bad as Cerberus! I'm sorry I didn't notice this fic before; it's really very good! There's no major spelling or grammatical errors, (a rarity at the present) and it's nicely written. I think the most redeeming quality, however, is that it's ORIGINAL! When everyone else is writing the same old thing, you chose something different, and I really think that will set you apart as a writer if you keep it up. :)

~~Moony

lol that crazy Clow Reed. Good job!