I luv ur stories!

I LOVE IT!

Thanks for putting up a cute, entertaining story! Nothing better than romance, adventure, and lead pipe fights with bartenders on the high seas, right? _

A few comments: Leo's character, while it had a lot of potential in his first appearance and I was excited about the sudden existence of a crotchety old man, was kind of underdeveloped. I feel like he just turned into the ultimate evil suddenly and with no real justification, and it confused me a little. Also, did they have X-rays back in the Romanov days? I'm no med student, it just jumped at me as a little out of place.

With only a few exceptions, I think you wrote their characters very well, and you certainly kept me entertained, which is all I can really ask for. Good job! Peace!

Love the prelude with little Dimitri in the beginning.

ah hah, that was just cute

Leo's character development here was quite poor and sudden. It should have been written longer.

The intro to this was really well written.

This was real good and a very enjoyable read! You are a great writer!

Anya seemed a bit OOC and I'm all confuzzled about Leo, but I still think that it was good. I keep picturing Anya in a cacoon and I start laughing. xD

-Jillian

i love it

:) Dimitri is so soo sweet! He and Anya are absolutely perfect for each other! Thank you for proving that in seven short chapters of one wonderful story.

happy writing,

Shadow

Do I like Leo? Or don't I? I suppose this question just proves how wonderful you are at shaping characters. We're not supposed to know if we like him or not, right? :)

Off to finish,

happy writing,

Shadow

*Laugh

Good-bye Jaques! W/ and accent above the "e"!

I don't care if you don't own him, Dr. Jaques was awesomeful! e! "Decades beyond trying to understand young people." YAY! Who doesn't love kind old French doctors!...?

Anya always wins! Always! hee-hee