very cool ff.. you got both of them very well IC

I dont know why, but I liked camula, she was cool..

and I didnt mind the way she had won against ryou, it was an interesting duel :)

Another interesting one, though I disagree with the ending. Personally, I think they have a lot of power; they're a reflection of the maker/holder of sorts. Maybe not in this particular case, but have you watched the indigo league of Pokemon, with Sabrina and her doll which mirrors the child and the humanity she rejected to pursue her telekinetic training? Or Alice, who mirrored the darkness of Doll Chimera, who in turn mirrored the darkness of those duelists? Though that's just my personal opinion there.

Great story. Could have used a sex (or in Zane's mind, rape) scene.

i want to doll to marow.

Oh, poor Ryou. I mean he would make an incredibly sexy vampire (he could me anytime *wink, wink*) and maybe a cute doll but Kaiser doesn't do powerless. He's always the one in control. :) Amazing story. I wish there was more but as you've said in the past, I'm sure you'll write something expanding on the Camula/Kaiser pairing later. Looking forward to reading more stories from you.

wow this was amazing. i wonder what would have happened next.

Very nice, and creepy! You know, I got this idea for an eerie Camula fic the other day, wrote some notes for it...and you've inspired me not to abandon it! :D

Ooh, creepy fic, man! Just in time for Halloween, too.

Half of me feels awful for Ryou and hopes that that really didn't happen...and another half of me just says, "Wow! I don't know if I should call him a lucky or unlucky duck."

Hey, how do vampires reproduce, anyhow? They're undead creatures, after all, aren't they? I don't really know that much about vampires (I'm more of a dragon expert).

An honest to goodness Camula/Ryou fic! To be honest, it's the first one I've ever read. This was both creepy and sensual at the same time. (...if that makes any sense.) Ryou's helplessness was refreshing; I'm so used to him being the dominant character. I really enjoyed it!