Reviews for I Only Have Eyes For You
Guest chapter 12 . 9/13/2019
I love your writing but I hate the plot lmao
cheap chapter 16 . 5/19/2018
That was a cheap ending for all that writing! C'mon flush it out a bit. Put in some effort!
Few things chapter 14 . 5/19/2018
Speaking as someone who's been in several hospitals NOBODY gets any rest or sleep in a hospital! A part of me believes that's deliberate to chase patients home.

The other thing is this parallel story ... it kind of sucks. First, why would anyone confide that they wish they'd boinked the other guy to their 'new' doctor of all things?! And it cheapens the whole idea of love. Sun coming out... sinking ships... hemorrhoid cream... That's all nonsense! You'd better have a better clue to who you want in our life than that crap! I'd probably toss 80-90% of this chapter right out as it kind of stinks up your whole story. ~jsm
HeartOfAServant chapter 1 . 5/18/2018
You’ve written well. Though its not one of my favorites but still your writing style is amazing and i would have wanted to read the completion of the story. The way Sasuke was portrayed is OOC. Sasuke as painfully obvious as it was, never harbor romantic feelings for Sakura (at least not in my opinion). What he feels for Sakura is like a debt of gratitude. The feeling that he owes Sakura that much so i dont see him as someone who will ask Sakura on dates. I dont like the part where Sakura can’t chose between the two boys. But your a good writer. Keep writing!
PursuitOfDreams chapter 17 . 12/8/2017
This was a well written story that wasn't angsty but had that perfect dose of drama and conflict. I like the approach of having Sakura come to the realization with minimal interference on Naruto's part. Just this natural sort of maturation that comes with age and experience on her part. Your OCs were lovely and I loved the way that they progressed the story and helped the characters develop, and Sai was hilarious and was just what this story needed to feel complete. Your characterizations of Team Seven didn't feel OOC and if NaruSaku had been canon, I could imagine their personalities and interactions being exactly as presented in this story. This was a well written story that was presented beautifully and I salute you.

Overall grade: 8.5/10
Krapo chapter 17 . 9/8/2017
Cute!
BatsuOtomo chapter 17 . 10/2/2016
That was magnificent! You're a great writer. Thanks for taking the time to write this, and also the extra chapter :)
husky2c chapter 17 . 8/28/2016
*cries in narusaku tears!* beautiful story!
samuraipanda85 chapter 17 . 10/11/2015
That was a lovely story. For a second there I thought it was going to be sasusaku but you pulled through in the end.
samuraipanda85 chapter 13 . 10/11/2015
Yeah that wasn't symbolic at all.
samuraipanda85 chapter 3 . 10/9/2015
*slams counter* THANK YOU!
samuraipanda85 chapter 2 . 10/9/2015
I'm pretty sure my heart just burst from being overstuffed with fluff.
aaa chapter 16 . 6/1/2015
que porquería de historia enserio 17 cap. y solamente en uno naruto y sakura estuvieron juntos . que desperdicio de mi tiempo .
pd: sakura es una perra ,
NARUSAKU246321 chapter 1 . 2/15/2015
i really love this story,
XxAshishxX chapter 17 . 2/4/2015
Great story. Really enjoyed reading it
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