Reviews for Holy Crow
LadyViolet2112 chapter 12 . 2/23
Great story. Love it
mfaerie32 chapter 11 . 1/23/2019
Did they turn her or suck the venom out?
mfaerie32 chapter 10 . 1/23/2019
Bella's a coward. ( She does't really stand up for herself. She caved & did all the apologizing. She's constantly wimpering or cringing in fear. (
mfaerie32 chapter 9 . 1/23/2019
Sooooo, she's the one that apologizes? Seriously? He let her into his life, then insulted her intelligence by lying to her face, AFTER saving her 8n the jeep, then ignores her for weeks...and now she's the one at fault?! BS. And if James bit her, she'd be burning from the venom.
mfaerie32 chapter 7 . 1/23/2019
Wow...Rose has the audacity to blame her? They lied to her, then ignored her, 5hen mocked her embarrassment w/mike & made fun 9f him. Really? She hurt him? They could kiss my ass.
mfaerie32 chapter 5 . 1/23/2019
I doubt w/her clumsiness that she went for a walk in the woods 8n 4in heels. That just ain't happenin'.
mfaerie32 chapter 4 . 1/23/2019
I hate when they eid that to her in the books. Never taking her wants in to account. Treating her like a doll to be dressed. Like she wasn't good enough as she was. And Bella never stood up for herself..just like here.
Lana chapter 3 . 4/23/2018
Nice chapter.
Lana chapter 1 . 4/23/2018
Wonderful chapter!
billiefrog51 chapter 12 . 11/13/2015
Really liked your take on Twilight. Well Done!
Supergirl chapter 4 . 4/16/2015
You are awesome! I love this story... Its so cute! 3
Guest chapter 5 . 4/14/2015
This is dull. Everything is 'cute' nothing going on. And bells a blind moron.
makaya chapter 2 . 8/31/2014
I LOVE IT SO MUCH
Guest chapter 12 . 8/24/2014
Lots of fun. Thank you
teamemmett chapter 2 . 7/8/2014
great cant wait to read the third
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