Talk about making a sixteenth birthday a great one after it started so horrible. I like how Carth, Zaalbar, and Canderous helped Seth come up with the idea. Makes them all seem like the family they really ended up being in the end. I honestly expected it to be Jolee knocking on the door when Mission was breaking down about Griff instead of Zaalbar. Nice work. Cant wait for more

This was one of the first stories I ever followed and it blows my mind to see it being updated to this day. Much nostalgia followed by solid writing keeps this on my favorites list. An underated staple of the KOTOR fandom.

Ah man its been long time since I last reviewed here and damn is there ever stuff I need catch up with XD But I must say after doing a playthrough of KOTOR 1 & 2 again, it has put me quite in mood for KOTOR stories and really liking how things are progressing from here.

Ah yes Griff, why do I get the feeling his gonna be experiencing a similar level of pain to his namesake from Red vs Blue suffered in this questline Can certainly imagine Seth is gonna really rip into his irresponsible actions and his treatment to Mission, should be interesting into seeing how the development of their relationship will progress from here and what Seth will do for her birthday.

All in all looking forward into see how you're handle the Tatooine arc here. Now since looking back to Tal Vizsla there and Mandalore the Unknown, apart of probably what gave that Mand'alor claim to the title was likely fact he's one of the last known Taungs since both the Great Sith War and the Mandalorian Wars has nearly rendered their species to extinction, being the species that founded the Mandalorians thousands years ago in the first place would give some Mandos who are desperate in wanting to preserve their culture and traditions would rally behind a figure that represented that history, whatever or not he is actually Mandalore the Indomitable's heir is certainly up to debate but the fact he is aware that the True Sith manipulated Mandalore the Ultimate and was able to not only survive against HK-47 but also reprogrammed him shows his definitely highly resourceful and his reasons for hiding likely is due to wanting to avoid any unwanted attention from the Republic and Sith Empire. Though can't say Canderous Ordo isn't wrong in asking the important questions about the legitimacy of this Mand'alor that definitely leaves me excited to the eventual meeting between the two, really liked that Canderous is slowly on his way reuniting the Clans and who knows maybe he'll even find potential recruits along the journey to find the Star Map though his definitely in for lot of challenges and seeing how far many of his fellow Mandalorians had fallen like those Raiders on Dantooine or seeing likes of Xor that probably give him a hard reflection of their actions in the Mandalorian Wars like on Cathar, all in all I am very much looking forward into the possibilites there.

Overall well done work here, I wish ya all the best of luck and hope you and your family stay safe out there in these crazy times. If you were interested, these links to videos here might provide ya with some interesting thoughts or details that might catch your eye but it's up to you, understand if not. Good luck, till next time.
PAR KOTE BAL IJAAT BE MAND'ALOR!

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"How skilled was the average Mandalorian soldier?"

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"That Forgotten Dude who Nearly CRUSHED the Republic - Story of Mandalore the Ultimate"

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"Why this Sith Faction was the ONLY Thing Revan Truly Feared"

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"Mandalorian Documentary 24,000 Years of Honor"
*This video does well in explaining about the Taung that could come up with Canderous or even Jolee Bindu considering he fought in the Great Sith War and probably has had his experiences with the Mandalorian Crusaders in his adventures*

This is an absolute favorite story of mine, and I’ve loved reading it over the years. I can’t wait to see more!

Arrgh, Ive been following this for so long now and every single time it leaves me smiling! It's so sappy and I love it!

Good chapter! I have a feeling when Mission finds out the truth about Griff being a total deadbeat, she's gonna have a lot of tearful regrets about the things she said.
Quote:
Mission (Incensed/disbelief) "You... You're hitting me up for credits?! I don't believe this! You know what?! Lena was right about you, Griff! We should've just left you with the Sandpeople! Don't you dare talk to me anymore - EVER! (Storms off with angry tears in her eyes, a look of hurt and betrayal on her face)
Seth: (turns to Griff with a look of disdain) (scoffing) "Wow. Just... wow."
Hey could possibly add a scene where they see Lena back at Anchorhead and Seth can see that she's conflicted about whether or not to apologise, he encourages her some speach
and she decides to do it.
Lena: "I'm so sorry you had to find out like this Mission."
Mission: (tearfully) "Me too."

I can't say how I happy I was to see an update of this story!

Thank you for still writing this fic

Happy Birthday for the story.

I hope that you continue this story, this is a really well written fanfic, with an actual romance instead of a "We met, we kissed, and now we're married and hey, a harem is the best idea ever". I like that you're fleshing out all of the characters to have even more depth than what the conversations in the game entail. This is a great work and I really want to see it through the end.

Actually has a lump in my throat at the first part.

I actually almost cried at the last part! :'(

Glad to see you're back! It's nice seeing them act like teenagers for sure. Love the story and look forward to more. Real life must take precedence of course, but I eagerly await the next chapter of this story

I truly love this story. Thanks so much for continuing it for so many years.

Is Tal Vizsla the same Mandolorian that the tv shows says became the first Mando Jedi?