J'aime beaucoup et fu et shino sont le couple parfait.

J'aurais voulu que sasuke ne puisse plus utiliser le sharigan tout en accusant sakura
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J'aime beaucoup ce qui se passe avec neji.

Hanabi na que 8 ans 8 ans donc non pour les examens.
J'aimerais que Hinata utilise le sceau.

Le problème avec lhokage est en tant que chef il ne peut pas faire de favoritisme et avec naruto il en fait c'est certain après il connait kakashi si il fait confiance en naruto il met tous les jonins en port à faux.
Pour le harem kuibi, haku, hinata et anko sont les meilleurs.
Hanabi vient avec le temps et avec sa soeur apres.
Temari j'aime beaucoup même si jaime son couple avec shika .

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read . And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

That because the fangirls don't have good assets

Good story loved the twist at the end did not see that coming though with you other stories depicting the hokage should have

this was a great story.

Such a good story. I know why you did a lapse of all the events afterwards, but I'm not happy you skipped all that goodness in between you could have made. Still, quite worth a read.

am i the only one who finds it weird that naruto can read minds going as far a suna and yet he finds none of the villians?

the way you discribe the force makes it the same as nature chakra and with kuybi it id all but certain he will fall to the dark side. ahh the folly of smashing to universes together to bring more power without thinking of consequense

a polite hk 47? thats just wrong, he is rude against 'meatbags' even if they are his master

Well the total number of shinobi forces of iwa has got to be getting kinda sparse by now! And the third wouldn't "let" him? How could the third possibly "stop" him? Bowing to inferiors never made much sense to me and the third has proven time and again he is inferior to just about everyone! (in one way or another). Also why isn't the village turning around? Shouldn't the "bigot pool" be getting kinda thin by now too? With the uchiha dead, they now have no "white knight" or "champion" to believe in as they are always used to having, if they don't pick naruto.(surrounded by enemies and without naruto, no allies) They have been "conditioned" to want a person to stand behind since childhood so Naruto is it (pedigree, power, chip on shoulder, all check) so they should be turning around now.

Well the second he sent the two beasts from iwa to the demon realm, he screwed the akutski and torched their plans! So they have no reason to exist anymore, also the rabbit isn't ever coming back. So zetsu failed.

That bit with him walking to iwa, um they couldn't possibly be considered one of the major villages anymore, dozens of attacks with squads, a failed invasion, a small army 2 chapters after said failure, and then three years of non-stop losses?(sheer numbers say that they can't). Plus the loss of two jinchuriki... What kinda pathetic, idiot village lets their "leader"(term used loosely here) do that? He's trading more and more of his village for revenge against a dead man. Nobody is gonna put up with that.
Why not just send info to kumo on how weak iwa has become(in terms of numbers, at least in terms of how few powerful shinobi they have now, lets face it, they've wasted entirely too many) and let kumo eat them? Or a kumo/suna/(possibly konoha) alliance, after all, iwa are the ones that broke the treaties between the villages several times! So it would all be above board. Let suna and kumo devour them in their lust for fame and money and jutsu. (maybe even a few bloodlines for kumo if iwa has any). As for the stuff with the third? Well it kinda makes sense, but it also doesn't since his previous thoughts, actions when there was nobody around don't line up... Plus how was he supposed to "convince" the girls that they and their kids would be safer with his people then inside an estate covered in an impenetrable force field guarded by stuff that was quite literally beyond anything the ninja countries could do? Seems like a glaring oversight in his "plan"... I guess my only last complaint is that asta and nibi/yugaito weren't really used and naruto himself had an entirely different form (yoko) that he never used in the entire 14 chapters except to screw girls that already wanted to screw him even without it, it was kinda a waste! Well that and he apparently had an entire summon contract that he relegated to being just "carrier pigeons" in the beginning chapters.

Unnerved by the sight of death? Um hanabi already killed during the invasion, she was surrounded on all sides by people killing and dying and some she did... So how is she unnerved now? and "not expose her to death".. Um so the failed invasion wasn't exposure? Considering it was 2 vs. 1 war.. and the 1 won, I'd say she's seen plenty of death already. and whatever happened to mitoko? she was saved too for some unknown reason, and should have helped prevent all this.