so good!

omfg this was really a good story I could not stop lol.

great job. :)

i love how he solves the problem of determining what he can call his child

Read the first two chapters. I gotta say, though, that this is very amusing. Whenever I read this, I keep seeing Mayuri's various facial expressions and various slouches in his chair along with thought bubbles. It's an interesting series with an interesting character. The creep was always rather enigmatic other than the fact that he was totally out of his mind.

Woah, you... you used my idea? Someone actually listened to me? Amazing! ) you deserve a bucketful of cookies for this

- (::) x42

Not to mention that the chapter was beautifully written and I really liked your take on his origins, too. Especially that he named Nemu after his mother, it's no sweet (and not like what people expect of him) )

Keep up the good work!

I have wondered what in the world happened to him to make him so...him.

Seriously, I think I dislike Mayuri almost the most out of any Bleach characters. Let me rephrase that, I like him a lot as a character, as a person to meet I'd run like hell while screaming. The only reason I came around and started liking him a little is when he felt bad that Nemu was seriously injured in Hueco Mundo.

Mayuri's weird. I like all of these chapters. I do wonder what would happen if Nemu and Kenpachi hooked up- no, wait, I know what'd happen. The whole Seireitei would be "WTF, guys," and Yachiru'd be over the moon.

One really wonders what happened to Mayuri to make him the way he is. I love this and I hope you'll continue it.

would Akon be a good match for Nemu?

This is a good story so far. I'm looking forward to finding out what Mayuri contemplates next.

For your next chapter Mayuri should use his own DNA to make the two things necessary for an egg to form...ahem. And then make his own kid. Superaccelerate its growth and have hilarity ensue. XD

Interesting reflections on one of the scariest men in Bleach-dom.

i'm glad you finally updated again I like this story and the way you write

for the next chapter why not have him ask Nemu for help on his inventors block?

If I had just a little bit more, (say, a couple of chapters) of information about your ability to spin words I would happily declare you a genius. Honestly.

Your style is smooth and minimalistically refreshing, and I really want to read more things written by you. There are sometimes a few spelling mistakes here and there but really, that's how it is with everyone. (of course, a little extra praise is given for writing about my favourite captain D)

As for the next chapter...

...how about contemplating his own upbringing/history? It'd be interesting to have your view of that.

Keep on writing, mate, and I'll keep on reading.

LOL! I just love Mayuri-san! Please continue it's really good.

What about the idea of having a son, or a proper heir, so to speack.