Wow, this is really bad.

Uratha for the win! Its so rare to see decent world of darkness fanfiction, let alone x overs! so far, so good.

More this is very interesting

Cool story so far:-)

Nice story so far! Please continue with another chapter real soon! Looking forward to it!

this story has a terible ending ...torran

woops sory that last comment was ment for someone else great story so far though bro

COMPLEAT WHAT THE F #K DYOU MEAN COMPLETE I"M SO PISSED I CANT EVEN SPELL THIS PROPERLEY THIS IS ABOUT AS COPLET AS IF I WERE TO TAKE NOODS THROW THEM ON A PLATE AND SPRINKLE MAYANASE ON THEM AND THEN CALL IT MACARONI AND CHEESE

Forsaken and Pure? holy shit this is a World of Darkness Werewolf! holy crap the halkeginians are fucked so badly... :) I cant wait...

yup

at that part wgen she asked why is he so agressive,well when i read the reply i thought i was gonna die of laughter,alsi you are right the BEEPS are more funny then hearig the swerwords,thanks for the story and keep up the good work. :)

Nice.

I can't believe I didn't read this before! And I also can't believe it's over already. But really, I guess there's nothing else to tell, even though I wanted to see him against Wardes, Louise's parents, Henhrieta (did I spell that right?) maybe a little bit more about Siesta...

But it was a good read anyway. Thanks. o/

I was thinking of Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess the whole time

That was well written! I loved the plot too! I will be waiting for the next part! _