Reviews for An Unlikely Threesome
Lord-of Oceans-Poseidon chapter 1 . 10/27/2018
the fuck lmao.
TinaF chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
Great story!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2015
BUT he lost the FIRST time with Bella! He went against his morals! SO scky :(
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
that was good keep it up
Koshivuh chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
I'm not sure if I liked this, mostly because I can't picture Edward with anyone other than Bella...And I personally just don't enjoy the Bella/Jacob pairing...Unless it includes Edward (Or Jasper or Emmett). I'm just weird like that. Anyway, this was well written, in any case, and I plan to look at your other story :]
Princess Mishawaka chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
This was super great. You write beautifully. I understand Alice's gift to Edward and Bella but I didn't understand fully until I finally (dumb me) realized that now Bella is not a virgin so Edward is free to have sex with her? I am right aren't I?
smelsies chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Wow what an interesting way to push Edward's buttons. But what about poor Jacob? He is going to be heart broken.
KareBear1965 chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
That was hot.

Hugs
CCBTH chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
I seriously want to murder edward for this...what a disgusting selfish prick... and jasper and alice make me sick as well using bella like that...gross...no offense to your writing but this is sick...and bella just goes back into his arms...nasty if i were her or jacob id roast them and put their heads onto sticks who do they think they are? Then somehow its ok because edward was thinking of bella...bleh...
EBJvampy chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
wow
IngloriousBitch chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
Oh my gosh that was awesome! Best lemon yet.. and the story line is great! Really! Very well done!
weflytothetardis chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
LOVES IT!
supertwilightfreak chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
i love the last paragraph so much!
Innocent Lamb chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
Aww!
SandKastles chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Wow...whoa...just...amazing!
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