Reviews for An Unlikely Threesome |
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![]() ![]() ![]() the fuck lmao. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() BUT he lost the FIRST time with Bella! He went against his morals! SO scky :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was good keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not sure if I liked this, mostly because I can't picture Edward with anyone other than Bella...And I personally just don't enjoy the Bella/Jacob pairing...Unless it includes Edward (Or Jasper or Emmett). I'm just weird like that. Anyway, this was well written, in any case, and I plan to look at your other story :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was super great. You write beautifully. I understand Alice's gift to Edward and Bella but I didn't understand fully until I finally (dumb me) realized that now Bella is not a virgin so Edward is free to have sex with her? I am right aren't I? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow what an interesting way to push Edward's buttons. But what about poor Jacob? He is going to be heart broken. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was hot. Hugs |
![]() ![]() ![]() I seriously want to murder edward for this...what a disgusting selfish prick... and jasper and alice make me sick as well using bella like that...gross...no offense to your writing but this is sick...and bella just goes back into his arms...nasty if i were her or jacob id roast them and put their heads onto sticks who do they think they are? Then somehow its ok because edward was thinking of bella...bleh... |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh that was awesome! Best lemon yet.. and the story line is great! Really! Very well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVES IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the last paragraph so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...whoa...just...amazing! |