Pretty good. Could've been better if you'd let Reno top once in a while too and you'd tone down Cloud's dislike for Tifa.

i love this story it is the bwast yaoi i have read and am not just saying that great work

I really liked this! Reno x Cloud is one of the hottest things ever man!

*Kara-Chan

dood... wow... just... wow... I loved this so much!

Phwah! So hot! Just fantastic... But Oh I was waiting for the Cloud/Reno/Vincent 3some ... But it never came *cries*

Oh well... Ill just have to read your fic again to take my blues away... hahah...

Such fantastically long chapters!

Sigh...

*goes to check out your other fics*

OMG i have read your story like, 5 times in a row! it is SO good! and EXTREMELY hot. Cloud and Reno are amazing together. i love the way you created their relationship! Great job! im sad you stopped! i guess i will just have to keep reading your same story every time i want some hottness from Cloud and Reno lol!

Damn. Where the hell have I been?

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Wow, vraiment intense! Au début je pensais vraiment que Reno avait décidé de punir Cloud comme il le méritait XD Ah, pis j'ai trouvé que ta fin était ok. Pas trop mushy pis pas trop rushée, mais straight to the point lol. C'est un peu triste que la fic soit finie, mais ça veut dire plus de Vincent/Cloud! Tk, bravo pour avoir réussi à les garder IC, ça a pas dû être facile lol

Au plaisir de lire ta prochaine fic _

Woah o_O hot stuff right there xD

And it was a pretty decent ending and the whole forgiveness part made me think of the FF movie all over again when Cloud was all sad and brooding about forgiveness and stuffz x]

Great story! ]

it's over? NNOO!

that was an awesome story, some pretty heavy stuff, but it's like, you can't stop reading! lawl ]

you're a great writer, keep it up!

BTW, i rather liked the ending, it leaves it open for a seul perhaps...?

anyhoo, loved the story, will most definately be looking up more of your work!

Amy X

Allô!

Vraiment nice comme chapitre! Je suis contente que les choses se soient arrangées de cette façon-là. Cloud a pas assez souffert à mon goût, mais si on veut un happy end, va falloir s'en tenir à ça lol. Ou ben Reno aurait pu insister pour coucher avec et le violer XD Cloud aurait même pas pu dire non tellement il se sent coupable :p

Sinon, ben j'ai adoré la passe du "Unfair!" pis celle du sofa. Reno est vraiment attardé XD.

J'ai hâte de connaître la fin, pis après ça on peut passer au "vrai" fun XD

aw! sweet, at the end!

poor Reno, though!

Luv it! Please update SOON!

Amy X

Aww they made up :D

Hopefully Cloud won't make any more mistakes like that. Poor thing I thought he was going to breakdown or start hypervenalatin when he was talking to Reno. o_O

I loved how this chapter had bits and bits of humor in it to lighten up the mood

hmm reno knew cloud cheated on him huh? im surprised cloud didn't say anything bout reno following him to see where he was going. tho i spose he knew it wouldn't help and he's not gonna wanna bring it up later.

i can't believe reno forgave cloud just like that. i mean sure there's always gonna be that niggling feeling at the back of his mind now that says 'can i trust cloud while im gone on a mission?' although i do suppose he did beat on cloud enough to make himself feel better.

"Uh, Reno? This couch unfolds, you know?"

The redhead’s face was stunned now, and he looked at where Cloud was looking

omg priceless. and im sorry if you made this painfully obvious but did reno really not know? *i blame my dumb moment on it being nearly 4 am*

AH! Cloud's in trouble!

Poor Reno *cries*

That was awesome!

Please, please UPDATE SOON!

Amy X

Nice!

lol at the end!

Cant wait 2 read on!

Great chapter!

Amy X