I loved this story! Really, it was very entertaining. My only suggestions would be 1. Kagome curses a LOT and frankly it doesn't suit her "good girl" character. I think I would limit the foul language from her character in order to maintain that image of sweet and innocent good girl in contrast to her love interests. Ask the cursing just makes her sound trashy. 2. I feel like you over played her 'denial' of sesshomarus love for her too much for too long. It made her come off more DENSE than in denial. It also made her really annoying. For example, hoooowwww MANY times did he say "mate" and she said nothing. I thought perhaps she didn't understand what that meant and I was expecting her to eventually ASK, ...so imagine my surprise/confusion when, all of a sudden, the word clicked and she totally knew what it meant. It makes her seem stupid. 3. I would've played up the 'jealous sesshomaru' period more because who doesn't love a jealous sesshomaru? It was a missed opportunity for entertainment as well as the further progression of their relationship between the phases of her denial and acceptance of their relationship.

thank you for writing this amazing story! I've enjoy every word you have no idea how much feelings you've elicited from me...thank you so much!

Loving this keep this sweet and awesome wonderfully up

*sigh* honestly...why the rush? The last two chapters could be stretched to at least five chapters (more to read and enjoy for me *evilgrin*)

And then there should not be an epilogue but like maybe a hundred more chapters to it .

I so love your writing style 3

Ok...glimmer of hope for me...there are a lot more stories to read from you

Thxthxthx

very lemon-y and well worth the reading. i loved the way kagome always put sesshou in his place. in the end he found the love of his life and so did she. being patient has its rewards, doesn't it. :) c'ya'

I was listening to Selena Gomez's "Same Old Love" and I thought it just went perfectly with this chapter. The song barely connects to this chapter, but I don't know. It's what I think.

I loved this story, I'm happy to have been able to reread it.

ill admit i was a bit skeptical and a bit confused. touga confuses the hell out of me sometimes. but it was a good sotry and very funny at times. tho sesshomaru might tyr ebing a bit more careufl with kagome lol she is only human.

The only thing with this that was bad was that you didn't explain what happened to Koga and Sango after he ran off with her...
The rest of the story was great. :-). I love it. :-)

Lol, the ending was perfect. i was at first worried that the ending wont leave the two happy. (I am a huge sucker for Happy Endings) But it turned out really well, especially the Epilogue. ;P

Nice Job!
-Lizzy

This has got to be one of my fave Sess/Kag fics that revolved around alcohol. It was a wicked sweet story with a satisfying beginning, middle and end. I wouldn't change a thing. It was quite the entertaining story especially with Kagome's "amazing" singing skills. Please keep up the good work and update soon. Will you consider a sequel involving the pups? :P

OMG! I laughed so hard!

Damn, you're just begging for trouble when you bet about getting a girl in your bed...

Loved the story. Thanks for writing and sharing it. What happened with Sango and Koga?

This was really awesome. Who am I kidding? All your stories are awesome! Kinda sad that it was so short, but all stories have to begin and end somewhere, right?