Wow! I loved the way you wrote everything in Takagi's perspective without making it sound out of character. I think he probably would have had these thoughts when they first started 'dating'. I loved how you made it all sound so in character, even Miyoshi. Well done!

kya! this is a welll done one shot...this iss years late but it shows juat how well its done nice!

I LOVED this. Completely beautiful, I totally can see him having those thoughts.

This is perfection.

Ah. Just can't get enough of these two. Truly a "real-life romantic comedy", they are. :)

So cute. :)

Loved it! It's nice to see some Kaya/Akito, and it's wonderfully done! :D I wish there were more of this around :P

It never gets old or boring no matter how many times I've read it. I've just reread it again and realized that I haven't reviewed this yet which just doesn't sit well with me. So I'm here immediately correcting this slight and hope to make amends. I love love love this fic! Love how Shujin couldn't make himself let Kaya go no matter how much he bullied himself into it. I hope you could be convinced to write more fics for this pairing because there is a severe shortage around here and I just can't get enough with these two. Please? Anyways, great fic, I'm officially s fan! ~

"Looked like his heart wasn't giving up without a fight."- Squeal. I love this line. Great to end the story like that. Hahah. I can actually imagine akito thinking and feeling these things. Awww... I wish you would write more stories about these pairing.. Good job!

I luv this pairing! Kaya is such a wonderful girl and she's good for Takagi

so nice! in the sea of Saiko/Shujin fanfics, this Akito/Kaya one is especially welcomed. And it's really well-written too!

*huge happy smile*

I love this portrayal of their relationship!

I found this really sweet. Even now, their characterization in this rings true!

AWW this is adorable and I love it!

The last line was just PERFECT. It leaves a lasting mood. Well done! :D