Discovered this story this week and read it straight through in one sitting after getting hooked by the first chapter. Just what I needed as an antidote to everything going on in the world at the moment.

Thank you for the creativity and effort you put into this story! *bravo*

As someone that has read all of the story's mentioned above i will say this, Within the hero's journey their is a formula to tell the story itself! That being said, imitation is the sincerest form of flattery...

Beat up strange people

I wish their was more deviant stuff in their (sorry I’m a perverted kid maybe that’s why my gf is always mad at me)

It’s awesome but can you add pictures?

I've read this story multiple times and it's just as good as the first time.

Read it a dozen times and I can't love it more!

Ahh...
The Nacos Scene!

It is one of the best I have ever read in fanfiction.

Now did Kim forget asking?
Did Shego dream the request?

Stories like this become family legends.
Things mothers tell their daughters, and grand daughters, and...

I googled Joy Harjo.
This isn't the first time I've read this fic.
It is the first time I considered Joy might be a real person.
Please put info like that in an authors note at the end of the chapter.
I'm betting others would want to know.
I'll be reading her blog after I finish this fic!

Thanks!

Love the Young Frackastein referince

Somehow it seems out of character for Ron to have told Yori that prom is when U.S. women "give it up." it just seem to fit right with how you've portrayed him previously. Only an asswipe would tell a girl that, so it seems you've made a contradiction there. Why would he be all nervous and shy around girls in the rest of the story, then you make him say something totally out of character? You know writing good yuri doesn't mean you have to have any guy say or do something mean or asinine in any chapter. I just think action detracts from his character development. Sure, there are probably many dumbass guys who would say something like that but not Ron after how you have portrayed him throughout the rest of the story. I'mso glad you dropped the nudist thing. To me it was another out of place story distraction that almost seemed like pure fan service. I think how you wrote intimate scenes between Shego and Kim were done very romantic and special and dare I say sexy. You never needed the nudist stuff. I don't think again, that it fits well into your story which maybe why you don't mention it the few chapters. And I think dropping Abby down in the background the last few chapters was a good idea as well. I don't think her position in the story warranted a major part after the hospital scenes. Overall, I really enjoyed this story and look forward to looking at your other stories. Take my questions and suggestions with a grain of salt. I'm not a writer, but an avid novel reader four over 50 years and fan fiction reader for the last year or so. I am glad whenever a writer mentions same sex marriage as my brother was murdered decades before the U.S. legalized them. He was never able to marry his partner which has always saddened me. I also want to thank you for a well written yuri story. Yuri has been my favorite anime, manga and fan fiction genre for awhile now even though personally I'm a married hetero guy. The reason I enjoy yuri so much is that though I was hard sci fi reader for decades, romance has been my favorite genre for awhile now as I find usually yuri writers build a romance story that has depth beyond just sex and their characters seem more well developed along with the storylines. So thanks once again for your hard work and best of luck and success in your writing.
Jay
Arizona USA

With all the money Shego has, you only gave them a weekend for a honeymoon? Where is your romanticism? LOL What were they in such a rush for? Just funning with you.

"No drugs. I can do this." HAHAHAHA! I've talked to so many mom's and they said they had stated the same thing, yet when the pain came they were screaming for the epidermal! My wife did the same when our son was born, she still laughs about that. In your last paragraph you state that Anne and James made Shego marry Kim, but it was stated earlier that it was Kim's challenge to Shego to marry her is what ended up pressuring (no one "made" Shego do anything) Shego to take up the challenge. It appears a contradiction to me, but mot one that most would catch and doesn't hurt the story at all. I'm excited for the ending.

Why would they have to enter a religion? They already seem to have good morals and certainly the 3 abrahamic religions have holy books filled with horrible moral teachings that no parent should want to teach their children. Why do some people adopt the idea you must believe in a faith to be a good person? One surely does not. Kim even says she's not a christian anymore and she is a good guy fighting against the bad guys. I don't think religion was ever mentioned in canon either. Except for the religion part, I just adore this story and everything is written so its believable and not just some crazy stuff. Thanks so much and I look forward to finishing my reading.

Absolutely loved this story! I loved the well researched story, that really fit the characters and their personalities. Great balance of humor, action, love, amd yes, sex. Well done, and thanks for sharing!