Reviews for Detention
KingMickeyMeowwow chapter 22 . 6/21
That was such a great fanfic of roxas and axel. I liked that it didn't have them have sex. I just can't picture my favorite video game characters having sex. Kissing I can see happening. Is really good and this is my first time commenting on a story.
lunika shonigiri chapter 6 . 7/20/2019
I feel the same way about this as you and I have been reading this over and over but yes I do with some guys in our world could be as cute as the ones in kh or ffvii.
Guest chapter 22 . 4/8/2019
this story was good hhhh I wish it was contiinuef
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2018
While on the surface it looks like the usual fanfic the author desribe the suroundings like a pro
LucEva chapter 1 . 1/28/2018
I have read the whole fanfic 10 times within the last month
Elijah chapter 14 . 6/26/2017
Omg. So I started reading like two hours ago and ... Why? I mean I,love it but seriously feeling roxas's heart break right now seriously loving this.
Guest chapter 22 . 5/11/2015
Although this was written like 6 yeara ago. I love it
PlasmUser chapter 22 . 4/18/2015
Loved. it.
i can't even describe the vast amount of feelings pouring out of me because of this beautiful work. I mean. the idea behind it was amazing and you can see how much your writing improves as the story goes on. it's so great I love it.
Kennedy chapter 22 . 8/7/2014
Wow! That's was the most emotional story for me ever! You need to write a sequel to this story! You should publish this story!
Another Night Without You chapter 22 . 7/8/2014
hey! this fanfic is the first one that I read after a years didn't read any. And I'm glad that I found this fic! the story is good, how actually a small thing lead them into something life-changing. I really love the story :) You also put Roxas and Axel's character in... I dunno how to say it, it's just right. Just right in place. Anyway, great job for this fic :D have a great day!
That one guy chapter 22 . 7/2/2014
Just one more chapter!
That guy chapter 20 . 7/2/2014
PLEASE CONTINUE!
Emma chapter 22 . 6/24/2014
Best thing I've read in a while! The last paragraph made me cry!I loved it!
girlpod50000 chapter 22 . 1/15/2014
Oh my god, that was the most amazing story i have read of this ship. I completely love it, it is fantastic.
semyx69 chapter 22 . 11/16/2013
Sorry stupid auto shit. Anyways I love how you made demyx call gays/lesbians "family" overall amazing 5 stars 100% thumbs up all the way baby
Please make a sequel
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