Damn, why do most people have to make the Volturi soo evil, I know that in the books they are more on the side of evil but not nearly as bad as they made them in the movies and a lot of fanfiction writers seem to follow how the Volturi where in the movies. I just think Aro is a bit to power hungry, but there is more to him then that, it was just never developed. But ohh well, this is still a good story so far. I do think you should have this beta read and edited, its good but it would be better if it was beta read and cleaned up, I know its old but its never too late lol.

O.o Woah...

)..;

Oh Wow Jacob you're melodramatic is it the hormones? lol

Awesome story it was a total success

The POV's seem more like dairy entries in that they are so vague. It would be nice if each POV had more to it then the simple short paragraphs you have. I am enjoying reading it though, it's new and different from others I've read.

I love this story honestly but Jacob's a real bi*ch in this story.
But like I said this story was written well and I love it.

that amazing, i love

Nice names for the babes.

So much sadness. Not a healthy environment.

Too many...I hate yous, I'm gonna kill yous...is not good for anyone...careful what you wish for.

Married? OMG! and Jake said...'Yes!'

So sad for Edward.

Wow, now that's some news Jacob preggers, Wow!

Things are getting more complicated than ever!