I want to eat your kneecaps know. HOW DARE you try and kill Shisui! D:

Well, Tenten aside, it was an awesome story! Thank you, you clearly deserve it. I'd really like to one day read the sequel. Good continuation. XD

SO he finally realized part of his true parentage. Sarutobi had no right to hide him that, and yet he has the gall to ask him to be Hokage. Laughable.

Ahah! I guess Naruto's sword is the famous Jyu-Ryu Daishi ? That sword along with Kakashi's White Fang are part of the Jyuubi's Claws? Part of the 10 famous swords of Kiri—though Kiri only ever had seven of them. Anyway, interesting.

Finally, I really wondered when they would call Tsunade to heal Shisui. Of course, there is the possibility he never regain his abilities as a Shinobi, but at least to wake him up. They took their time. Honestly, I thought it was the first thing they'd do once they came back from the mission. Actually, I had even thought they wouldn't go back to Konoha but would bring Shisui directly to Tsunade after their missiojn failure.

Useless Tenten. Can't you just lose and leave us in peace.

Ahah, Naruto recreated the Misaka's Railgun!

Mikoto's is so attaching. It would be great if she could get past her guilt and befriend, mother Naruto a little.

However, even if Tenten was not mentioned, as soon as you talked about the orphanage, I made the link with her and it spoiled my fun. At this point, I know it's an obsession, but I'm really riled up! This fic is just awesome, were it not for her, it would have been one of my favorite fics ever. I mean, she is the ONLY thing I badly criticized since chapter one. Why is she here? Sigh...

Honestly, when Tenten had foolishly decided to follow Gaï, I had the hope that you really would follow through my plan of 'sacrificing to save Naruto'. My respect to you lept through the roofs. Until, well she surivived. Sigh...

I hope Tenten won't become a leech, trying to make up with him and poaching him to train her while she's at it. She aleady took too much from him, I hope she won't have the nerve to ask him training.

That's really annoying. That fic is absolutely awesome! Since the beginning I only have compliments for it. The only stain to it is Tenten. Why did you have to put her as one of the main cast? Is it for some kind of shitty romance? If that's so, it failed. She only ruined my reading experience. Truly a pity. That fic didn't deserve such that. It didn't deserve a useless Tenten messing everything!

Oh shit, it seems Tenten is back in the story. You know, you should really take the idea of killing her. Would be great!

I'm happy Naruto calmed down and found the true reason of his outburst. I'm happy he didn't dropped Shisui. I'm so happy, both for Shisui and for Naruto.

Ah, I'm happy Tenten is a story of the past. Well, as it goes they will probably make up, but that's not for now and I doubt it will go farther than a little friendship—clearly not on the level of what he has with Shisui, Anko and Kakashi.

About Naruto's training, did he only train with Anko or did Shisui also trained him?

Sasuke's going to learn hell!

Such a beautiful friendship! I don't cry I tell you! That's wrong. Sniff...