This trip was something so different for Edward to deal with, out of his "comfort zone." He actually had to BE a teenage boy trying to impress on Bella's Mom, and Phil, that he was right for her. I liked being able to see what was happening with Edward while Bella was enjoying her time with Renee. They did learn things about each other that made them better together.

I like Bella being able to be so close, but just a bit too far for Edward. I like what he said about her playing a child's game but being a woman at the same time.

I'm glad to read about Renee's thoughts. She's a
pretty unknown character.

beautiful story, amazing writing skills/insight, great vocabulary and beautiful meaningful dialogues. thank you for sharing your thoughts/story with us. I would say/think that 90% of this likely to happen. -)

I loved it!

I was going to have this eloquent paragraph, of how well written, touching, and emotionally satisfying your story is. But the last chapter, along with your author's note, has left me speachless. Thank you so much for this. I can'tell wait to read it again. 3

Great chapter! Loved it! :D

I did like this story. I loved the concept. I must admit though I really thought Edward was going to tell Bella about Victoria.

That darn paper gets in the way of everything.

I bet Alice and Edward did have difficulty communicating when he was in Florida. Good job pointing that out.

Sweet ending to that chapter.

What a wonderful interaction.

Interesting insight from Renee.

Glad Renee is being supportive.

I loved the interaction between Edward and Phil's team.