I love Dark Side of the Moon. I love this one too. I'm sorry I didn't come look at the other stories you've written earlier than this. You do so well at catching your characters perfectly.

I love protective edward

At the last paragraph, I think you mean Jasper instead of Jacob. Keep up the great work!

Insightful take on this scene. You do well at writing Edward in the original character.

Very good as always even if Tanya is part of the story! LOL ... I really dont like her... I never thought that she could help Edward with his little problem and was a great surprise your interpretation... I would die happy if you could write Breaking Dawn in EPOV... so many things that I wish to read in EPOV... You're such na amazing writer! Congrats

Very good,this stuck close to canon.

I so love your fanfic! Truly wish you'd been able to do Eclipse and Breaking Dawn from EPOV. You've had me captivated for a week reading DSotM and youR other amazing works. Love Love Love everything I've read of yours!

I like the story part but I hated the... Inappropriate stuff. I would recommend If you changed that. I have read stories that have been ruined bc of lemons! Why are ppl so perverted? It's disgusting! :(

I enjoyed this alot. It was a wonderful interpitation of what was going on with Edward while Bella spoke with Jacob. It makes sence that he would go to her for advice too. BRAVO!

Great story,I enjoyed the scene with Tanya and Edward .You really don't get much from them in the boom together .

Great story:)))

that was nice, I love Tanya-Edward interaction:)

That was really good...

I love this 3

this is an aspect of the wedding that never occurred to me, i'm impressed that Tanya's honest attempt to help without making things purposefully uncomfortable