Ahah i love Hermione in this

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Oooooo! I like it, I like it! You are a good writer! Give me more!

good story

good but to short

i think its amazing

amazing

I love the Roseanne references! Those were awesome. I also love the Gilmore girls references you used as well.

Jess of TheGoldenTrioJKS

Teddy's dream girl is literally Luna. The description matched her perfectly. :)

Wait...why is it that when they are discussing Aerosmith and the vampire chronicles thing that she does say anything, but when he mentions Peter Rabbit then she's suddenly curious as to why he knows who that is?

Not to seem rude or anything but to me Hermione seem quite out of character. I get that she's a little on the fence anout learning she is adopted but I still don't see her as a rude typical rebellious teen. To me at least, she seems more of the kind of girl to be level hesded about all this and not be as defensive, like a snarling dog. I think her curiousity would overpower her anger. But, that's just my opinion.
On a different note, I love the connections you make between her and the Notts.

Dracos as probably surprised to see her

Wow!

Loved it!. I found the adopted one and will be reading it after reviewing. I loved the storyline so far the how the Notts are so sweet. Especially Theo as i always thought as him as an obnoxious kid.

Amazing