Okay this was a little insane. Honestly, if I were Bella, I'd bailed long before she did. I'm glad she was honest with Emmett because if she wasn't she would have lost him one day. Jasper seriously needs help. He sounds like a sociopath bc he doesn't show any empathy or remorse. He only does things that benefit him and he likes playing with people. The only reason I don't think he's really is, is bc he loves Bella and cares enough to know he'll only ruin her if they got together then. Maybe in a few years after therapy, they would both be in a good place. Timing is everything.

Charlie is a bastard. And I don't care what the previous reviewer said about Charlie being made the bad guy and Renee not getting called out for her flightyness. Renee had her faults, exhibited by the argument that led to the accident. But here's the thing, she kept trying to reconnect with her son. Maybe I missed it but I never saw where Charlie tried with Bella at all. It's like she didn't exist when him and Renee divorced. Whether it's really bc she looks like Renee and he hates her for it or maybe she chose to go with Renee. Either way, she's dead to him by HIS own making. And to get an impressionable teenager who sees him as a father figure to lie and do something like that for years is disgusting.

Alice is psychotic and two faced. I hope Edward overcomes the truth of his parentage to realize he deserves to be more than second best. Rosalie I think has been jerked around by Jasper so much that is Emmett wasn't there, she would be as bad as him. They all need a wake up call and I hope Bella was it.

this is one of the best non cannon stories I’ve ever read, this is the second time that I’m reading this. There’s a second part this story called “Last love found” I can’t find it anywhere, and I don’t know how to reach out the author, though this story is written almost 10 years ago. If anyone knows where I can get the second part please comment back. Thanks!

Une merveilleuse histoire. Mais je me demande. Est-elle fini ?

Does this Bella not think that she hurt her father to. I mean she is all about Rene what about about Charlie's feeling I guess writers just like to crap on Charlie instead of the neglectful Rene.

i loved it

Honeslty this last chapter make me feel like i’m reading the ramblings if a sociopath.

Well well well...I just finished reading this story all the way through with very few stops, and I can honestly say I was not expecting this ending. Maybe I missed the hint that this was not a happily ever after love story somewhere down the line, but some part of me was still hoping it would be in the end. I guess I can just imagine a different ending or I can rewrite the ending in my mind or something like that. Either way I learned a lot, I think this was a very accurate depiction of what first love can be like and I really appreciated this story, even if it made me cry and break my heart. Those are strong qualities in a story, so I think you did an amazing job. I loved the writing and the development, and I liked the last chapter of Bella's POV with the lessons. And Jasper's POV was a little harsh at first, as intended, but I found it interesting to get a view from him and I enjoyed it even if it was painful. I wish you had more stories! I wish you would write an alternate version of this story with a happier ending...maybe when Bella comes back from Jacob's at the end something could happen there instead of just goodbye. Or maybe college? Although high school love stories don't always work out in college, so it might be a bit cliche if they tried to make things work again. But maybe the time in college would be what they need to grow, so maybe after college they could find each other again. Idk my mind is just trying to see this another way because I was really heartbroken when they couldn't reconcile their differences, I mean Jasper didn't even sleep with Lauren or Maria...ugh if Bella knew that she would have been able to forgive him! Okay okay, I know I'm rambling now. This story has just severely affected me. Thank you again for writing it!

Is Edward with ALICE? That's just nasty. Alice is so ugly

Please bring back the sequel!

To anyone who wants the sequel, Last Love Found, I saved it onto my laptop before it got pulled. email themindfulnomad G and I'll send you a copy

To anyone who wants the sequel, Last Love Found, I saved it on my laptop before it got pulled. Email themindfulnomad and I will send you a copy

Please update this story !

I just finished reading this story. I loved it. It is almost a shame it had to end. I want more of Jasper and Bella. It was a good ending, just left me wanting more. I'm reading you other story too. Will there ever be a sequel to this?

I'm not sure if you're still active. This was a great read and I really enjoyed it. I understand why Bella won't take Jasper back no matter how she wants to and how much he begs. I think, sometimes you've just got to ignore your heart because sometimes our decisions are emotionally charged and will be toxic for us in the long run. I personally love them together though, and hope they find their way back to each other.

Now, there's been mentions of a sequel that was formerly up and it sucks I didn't get to read it. But the ending IS a bit open ended so I'll just hope the best for these two little babes

Omg I loved it