So...Allyson is Max's daughter?

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This was good. I would definitely read a longer story if you write one.

You, nice job. I really like the movie (well, except for the last like thirty minutes), so of course I'd like this. Course I write my own stories, with my own original ideas, but I look up fanfiction every so often and see what's new. Still you did a pretty nice job there, dudette.

Well, I think you have a nice idea there. I really like gray-area type of things, like the mixing of good and bad, you know? Understanding what made a good person do bad things, 'cause we're always good at the beginning but some of us end up,well, evil. Like Joseph Stalin.

But anyway, nice plot and you actually didn't have any typos! I mean how many people on fanfic don't?

Wow, D Queen! That was pretty amazing! You portrayed Max REALLY well, and gave me a whole new way of looking at him. Dude, that's awesome!

Very different, but intriguing. Always nice to give heart to a villian. Makes them more real.