This was so well written! I loved the way you portrayed their relationship. You did a very good job at writting Ichigo's emotions.

You have made me cry.. And I mean real tears. Its been three years since my sister passed, not from cancer, and I still can't bring myself to go see her.

I agree. Love the pairing but Ichigo doesn't need to be suck a bitch all the time!

You did a nice job on this. Thanks for sharing it with us

Oh this was wonderfully angst filled. I love angst. So much. I've never really come across any past love death moving on thing like this before and I quite enjoyed it. Also, thank you for not making ichigo this pathetic bitch hoe thing that so many people seem to enjoy. That irks me to no end. But I'm rambling now and I loved it so blah :)

waaaah i cried so much but it was still a very sweet ending but im still cryying while im writting this :')

aw. this chapter makes me happy.

I definitely teared up there. There's something - the way you phrased things or described a scene so bluntly yet with subtle details, how you could convey the story with indirect phrasing - I dunno, something was there that hit home and made me want to curl up and cry. It was very well written.

That was quite emotional, but i enjoyed reading it all the same. Nice work :)

:') Beautiful.

Aww so painfully sad, but so lovely pictured I cried~!

*tears* I like had me crying for a good 5 mins.

I like it, good job!

So it ended up being Ren/Ichi?

Ichigo's sad thoughts are heart-breaking. I teared up reading the second chapter. I think, however, you could've included more of Grimmjow in it, how they met, etc. _

Beautiful:)

Beautiful:)