This story was so sweet! I loved all of it! Instant favorite.

AWWWW.

That was beeeyoootifuuuulll.

Ehehe. Just one thing though: why is Tenten and Neji living away from Konoha? I mean, the story implies that they are. And it also implies that Neji was unaware of his cousin's marriage to Naruto?

I'm getting confused here so I might go back and re-read this whole chapter.

Aside from that it was a GREAT story!

I have seen the light,

reading was quite a delight!

Since I wasn't expecting that till christmas day, I'm really curious about the last wish ...

I like your Voldemort complex :D I also like your sixth chapter.

Funny as it was, I found myself caught between deciding that the cake should've come out perfectly and that it was perfect as it was.

It wasn't as bad as you said. It could've been fluffier, but it was ok.

Awww! Cute, but the serious issues were shunted aside. Well, we can't have everything can we? The mood of the story is light, so I'm not surprised that you didn't get into Naruto's actual issues with snow. Or am I just reading too much into his dislike of snow. I really liked that Hinata selflessly helped him have fun with it, but having him start to like the snow at the end ... It was abrupt and unexpected. He liked it because he liked Hinata, anything beyond that ... I just think that they should have talked about it a bit. I liked it nonetheless.

This chapter was nice! I didn't find it too funny, but it made me smile. I like your idea for the story. I hope to see good things for the remaining chapters.

This chapter made me very very sad. Yes, Hinata deserves a lot of good things, especially for her patience, but it seemed that no one cared for Naruto in this chapter. I'm not counting Hinata of course. Do you know how depressing that is? I liked the chapter, but it still made me feel sad.

I couldn't stop reading even for a second! It's a very fun fic to read, beautiful in many senses and all around funny. It's a good thing I came across this, I needed a break from all the angst and adventure fics I'd been reading, so I needed something light and fluffy.

You've got their characters to bat as well as their emotions. I think it's very nice how you portrayed Naruto and Hinata - he wasn't just some loud, annoying blond haired ninja proclaiming to be Hokage and she wasn't this really timid, weak Hyuga girl who had no confidence. Also Hiashi, he seemed a bit better here than in other stories I've read.

I don't think I can say anything about spelling or grammar mistakes. I haven't spotted any! (Or maybe I was too busy having fun reading this to notice) You are really good with humor, I'll give you that, and definitely fluff.

Though I wish you'd have had some line breaks to show if there were scene changes. I was confused in some parts.

Hope you write some more cute and fluffy fics! (No matter how big.) I'd be sure to review - and love - them!

Ja!

Love it!

I couldn't stop laughing while reading this chapter! I could so imagine that happening! I luved it! Lol! D

I LOVE this story! It'a absolutely adorable and fluffy! LOVE IT!

I love this fic except the fact that NejiTen's in it. But good stroy though! :D