| Reviews for Choices and Consequences |
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   Carlynul chapter 1 . 3/1/2019 Stop ive now read a few of your stories, mostly in dokuga (FYI peeps, this story has like 70 chapters on dokuga) and I have to tell you, you addres an AMAZING writer. Your grammar and setup is amazing, your ideas are original but don't veer tui far from the original characters. You're phenomenal. I am I picky bitch when it comes to writers and, frankly, I'm not usually nice about it. But I need none of that with you. You really are phenomenal and I hope you continue to write. ...so, as this site is equally designed so that we may critique, I have but ONE thing ive noticed in ask your writings. Just one. It's the overuse of the phrase "not to mention." I know, it's a filler phrase, much like filler words such as "like." As such, is easy not to notice your use of it. It's quite literally the only flaw ive come to find in your writings, and yet is not a large one. But one easily remedied if you choose to notice it. Otherwise I am head over heels in LOVE work all things you write. I DO hope you'll return soon. |
| AlyQihah chapter 1 . 4/2/2018 it's okay |
| AlyQihah chapter 6 . 4/2/2018 it's okay |
| viviane.bonneau chapter 4 . 3/1/2018 wow 500 year nap! does wonders for the skin! |
| viviane.bonneau chapter 3 . 3/1/2018 I really love how you've matured her yet kept her true to her character! Also love how the Sesshoramu Kagome mingling begins ;) |
| viviane.bonneau chapter 2 . 3/1/2018 oh Inuyasha you dumb ass...you deserve everything coming your way |
| viviane.bonneau chapter 1 . 3/1/2018 so beautifully written! |
| sam sewart chapter 1 . 7/28/2015 good wish there was a link to your story it's interesting. |
| Deaconicas chapter 6 . 6/29/2015 Hi, Texan Lady, i read some of your stories on Dokuga, and also your fan fiction profile. I love your stories, but it would be nice if you could perhaps put your live journal website on fanfic, if possible, because i have no idea where to find it. Thanks. AppleMay. |
| kitsune164 chapter 6 . 1/1/2015 Um a question what is the title on dokuga? |
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/11/2014 No, you should not contine Fair Trade since all it is is just an excuse for you to write your disgusting rape and abuse fantasies. You need to keep that shit to yourself instead of trying to glorify it. |
| young kagome chapter 6 . 5/1/2014 Thank you for letting us know! I will look for it on that site. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/11/2014 No wonder you've all but abandoned TA and Negotiations - you've abandoned the genre! Makes sense now. |
| babyvfan chapter 4 . 1/4/2013 That was almost beautiful. Almost because one, it was such a bittersweet tragedy. and second, I really wish the elder prietess would have made Kikyo suffered. After everything she done, suffering is so deserved. |
| babyvfan chapter 3 . 1/4/2013 i REALLY CANNOT TO SEE HOW THE BATTLE WILL END. |
