you should cut the phrase into 4 or 5. This made me don't know where the next thing happened, okay? But your story is tooo damn good that i can't resist :). Keep goin' , mirage!

wow... i'll be waiting for the nextchapter... i really like it!

hey, this is really good! inoue though, i was like who the heck is inoue, but after awhile i got it, but you should fix it to be less ambiguous.

Hmph. I hate Inoue. I think she's stealing Yuji from Shana.

So there's another Priestess aside from Hecate.

And Unbreakable Vow?

Are you a Harry Potter fan?

Interesting, Inoue has joined their group. I wonder if this means that she is going to become another rival for Shana when it comes to Yuji?

Anyways, good chapter!

A Flame Haze out for revenge, I like that! I wonder what you have planned now that they've managed to capture her...

LOL, 'Satou’s eyes almost bulged out from its sockets.'

This new Flame Haze seems to be an interesting character.

I love were this is going, its well written as well.

I hope to see more soon hehe, I will continue to follow your story to the end.

Best wishes,

Sakai Yuuji

Interesting start to your story! I like your idea of having Margery as a teacher. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

Not a bad prologue. Too bad there won't be a Keisaku x Margery pairing though.

There seems to be a boom of Filipinos here now. Must have happened ever since they showed all 48 eps on TV5, in Tagalog no less.