This was the best fic I have read in a long long time! You perfectly captured Bella and Edwards voices, it really felt so authentic to me. If you ever wrote another canon fic, I’d be the first in line! Really fulfilled the craving of good canon fic. Thanks for sharing your talents!

Omg yes. Tchaikovsky was that bitch that wrote real fckn canons into his music. A true legend.

thank you

forever

Yum

fun

Halfway through and every chapter feels the same. They kiss. From canon, I assumed they did a little more than practice kissing. First or second base at the very least.

fantastic! great exploration of that in between time and of their growing relationship.

This was so well written. Most times with ff you sense the difference in author styles that make Bella's personality a little different...but with this story everything felt so real. Like you were SM herself, not a single thing felt unrealistic, or like fanfiction, for that matter. A good story I loved there little 58 night journey!

You are a master

Ohhhh, so beautiful *-*

This whole thing that Bella has with the car annoy the hell out of me.

I liked it very much but not as much as I like edwards butt :-)

This was awesome! A lot of fun and characterization was right on! Thank you!

If your were quoting "Follow your arrow" I give you massive props. Almost no one know that song. If you weren't that's fine and I lover your story