Reviews for Cracked Ceiling version DMHG
Clevergurlz in Love chapter 1 . 19h
wow.. what a amazing story.. but it will really amazing if u can continue to write this ff,such a waste if let its cliffhanger. .
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2019
Powerful
Miriadel chapter 1 . 1/4/2019
Thanks for sharing!
Nifusi chapter 1 . 11/27/2018
Really well written. Please continue to write. I think it is one of the more realistic fanfictions because of their hatred to each other.
Draco knows he can never have her and is a spoiled man. He is quite obsessed with her so this could never have end up well.
If he really loved her ,he would have never raped her.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2018
Poor Hermione... but I found this part unintentionally hilarious: "She had never touched herself before, always busy with schoolwork and helping her classmates." Someone hasnt ever masturbated because of schoolwork? Yeah right... how exactly does that make any sense? TBH that made me laugh :D
problematic spiral chapter 1 . 10/5/2017
The extra details you added made the story a bit more heart-wrecking. What happened was just... amazing, I loved the twisted-ness.
Friend of the Seals chapter 1 . 12/30/2016
This was extremely upsetting but well written and definitely a horrifically realistic portrayal of both characters.
TnB4lyf chapter 1 . 10/11/2016
Wow. This was gut wrenching. But wow.
Ew chapter 1 . 10/7/2016
What the hell did I just read? That was a perfect examole of pure plain anadulterated painful rape. its so bad I feel like crying. You are a sick man and I wish I could report this somewhere. I mean ew! I read the reviews and I thought this would be nice with a naughty dark draco bit this was like the worst non co ever. I have read other non cons but they werent THIS! EW JUST EW! I SO PITTY YOU MAN! I AM SURE THIS IS A SICK SICK MAN WHO HAS WROTE THIS! SICK MAN!
Leti0422 chapter 1 . 4/17/2016
I love dark draco. So happy I found this great one shot
Mistress-Cinder chapter 1 . 5/10/2015
Twisted and Depraved. There is no redeeming this Dark Draco...
EkjotKaur chapter 1 . 4/17/2015
Type your review here...
Please do better chapter 1 . 4/1/2014
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watch this video.
Her 'virginity' wouldn't be running down anyone's member.
guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
this story is chilling your one hell of a writer
Angry young girl chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
AWESOME. :)
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