Love how you somehow made it that Will and Elizabeth are married and he has the bandanna, as well as not being away from her because of the curse. I love the loopholes.

Oh my goodness, this was beautiful! You're a wonderful writer and you did a great job!

Long, but cool.

Glad I took the time to read this. :)

I loved this story! The ending was so much better than the movie ending and I loved your portrayal of Bill after he became un-cursed. And the idea for that was really awesome. I almost cried when Will was being tortured.

I love it update love how hector Is scared of the turners and I love what you did I cried all the way through wills torture it was horrid then cried in happiness as bill was released it was so beautiful

Great story. I've read it a few times already, and love it. Love the torture..._

Really wonderful! great chapter!

Wow. Just...wow. I'd been thinking of writing something along the same lines for months now, but after reading this, I'm kinda scared to! This was AMAZING! It was, in my mind, actually better than hoe the sequels ended. Does that make sense? Oh, and thanks for keeping it Willabeth!