Story has potential but are you going to finish it or it just 4 chapters the story looks good I'm just getting tired of half-ass fanfiction with a stories never complete it I look forward to reading more thank you

Your Naruto fanfiction desert fox Redux is very well written I wish you tone down the Basher of characters is a little immature you're very good writer from when I can see you don't need a deposit to that you want to bash the character for his flaws and fine but I think this is amazing story without the juvenile passion of characters and you would you are extraordinary right up on what I can see if you did a good job and a unique spin on an article time travel so don't take this in the wrong way I'm just trying to offer some constructive criticism cuz I think your story has amazing potential and with a lot of Naruto Fanfictions have that kind of potential your stories has amazing potential but can you knock down the bashing you don't need it Bash 2 character or make fun of his flaws is not necessary unless you want to point something out that's ridiculous you did something amazing job with the story actually being done I would like to see more of it without the bashing because you have potential to be an extraordinary fanfiction writer good luck with your future fanfiction Endeavors and check out my YouTube page if you wish to see fanfiction music Concepts and ideas good luck

Hey if this ones stil up for adoption I'd be happy to take it ?

impressive story, CONGRATULATIONS FOR MAKING THIS STORY!

Such a heart-warming story... it really gives you a warm feeling in your chest... PLEASE CONTINUE!

Great story so far can't wait for what is next!

please update i love this story!

You haven't updated since 2009, but I'm going to favorite this anyways in the hopes that you might pick it up again.

more please it is really good xxxxx XP 3

there is one sakura one where she is an a time loop. each time she dies she is sent back. apparently the author llikes sakura or something and made it where sakura has some kind of angel bloodline while the sharigaon is a devil contract bloodline.

the temari one i read is recent, garra used a speacil full body jutsu that sent her mind back in time a little before the chunin exams. she wakes up crying in her bed and comes acroos naruto inside the ramen bar instead of yours inviting him there.

MAKE A UPATED MAN REALLY THIS STORY IS GOOD THE BEST I HAVE SEEN YET AND KICK SASGAYS TO THE CURB BITCH

I do hope you intend to continue this story. It is one of the better time travel fics out there, and I have discovered that good Naruto/Temari stories are rather difficult to find.

Good job, and keep up the good work. I'll cross my fingers for an update in the future. _

-Silenius-

Freaking Awesome. Especially the way he beat Neji! Flattened under the giant foot of Gamabunta! LOL! Talk about kicking the shit out of someone! I am also worried for Hinata's and strangely enough, Sasuke's mental health. What the hell did Hinata do that was so terrible? More so than drugging Naruto, and casting an illusion to appear as Temari to him to screw/rape him? I wonder if she attempted to kill Naruto to torture Temari with the usual, "If I can't have him, then no one will either!" Secondly, Naruto is the last of two clans, so the CRA (Clan Restoration Act) should apply to Naruto for being the son of a Kage, becoming a Kage-Level shinobi in the future, and is the container for the strongest of the tailed Bijuu. Anyone of those would be a valid reason for CRA to take affect in his case, that with out all the S-Rank Jutsu the his father left him that he mastered and the seriously SS-Rank Jutsu that he created. Hell, his children should inherit a natural elemental affinity for up to four of the elements: Wind, Water, Fire, and possible Lightning since I'm pretty sure that the Earth element doesn't run in either family. Especially Naruto's which the first and last names of him and his parents have to do with the elements that make up Storms, Wind, Water, and Lightning. Fire should come from Kyuubi being a Fire Spirit and possibly a future summon for his family. Anyway, another great story of yours that I'd like to see continued. Until then, Later.

truly excellent story! Can't wait too see what happens next.

You have a great story here that has alot of romacne and love in it. It is very sad that you have not updated it in 10 mounths. I hope you will soon.