I love this story!
The plot is thrilling, and although not entirely unpredictable, it is filled with a hot steamy slashiness that shippers will love! I hope to see more updates of this story, this is a masterpiece worth finishing.

I consumed this story like it was honey-slow and viscous. Some stories are meant to be read at a hurried, even frantic pace, but this is meant to be savored. I thoroughly enjoyed it,

this is fantastic, When I reached chapter 3 I was like 'wait? where's the other chapter!?' Because I would really love to see more, it's so well written and enjoyable to read :)

Is that all of it? It was very well written, and I did enjoy it a lot! But it does seem like there should be something else at the end. haha I dunno. Anyway, great job! :)

-Yvonne

Ohhhh, this was great! I went back to review the first chapter, if you're wondering why the reviews are so close together. But anyway, the smutty scene was very well written and as you've demonstrated in the previous two chapters, it was nicely described and had plenty of detail!

I'm loving this first chapter. You have a very descriptive writing style, and I love description and detail very much in stories!

I like it.

Great!

This was actually quite awesome. Period.

wow. Just wow. Without a doubt my favourite fiction on here! Just. Amazing. :

onto the sequel I think ;)

*squee!* ohmygodohmygodohmygod! LOVE IITTTTTT!

This is awesome, I LOVE THIS.

Awesome! I dont think there is mch else I can say.

carter's pretty perverted herself, so...

ever read in the company of wolves?

anyway, i love this. i did once read an sbrl beauty and the beast, but it was terrible. this is much better.

"but she won't discover that it's him till chapter threeeeeee..." LOLOLOL