Ah, so much potential.
Wasted.

Amazing story

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As one of the plot-driven naru/hana, I could help but like this story.

It's up to you if you're going to update this story but, at least consider it.

Epic story so far. Disappointed that you abandoned it. If I could, I'd adopt it in a second but seeing as you haven't been active for so long, that's not possible.

Warning! Carry on reading! Or ************, even just read the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she live in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to killed all the staff in the hospital, so the More-government decided that the bebest way to get rid of her was to kill her, so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now ever week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, cutting you and watching you bleed to death

Absolutely amazing! Love the pairing, love the plot and the the writing style! It's a pity that it's discontinued... I've got it on alerts so if you ever come back to it, I'll be reading. Did I mention how much I love this story? :D

Good read! 3 Unfortunately, you haven't updated it in a couple of years. xD I'll put it on alert anyway. My favorite part about your story is how unique it is! & your writing is great! Thank you for the fanfiction~

I have to admit, I was a little skeptical going into this story but now I am totally sold on the idea. thanks for the great fic and I hope to see more of it soon.

oh, what would the clan head think about the brother and sister _

I think the fic if worth continuing and making it M rated.

Not exactly stoked about the killing off Hinata part, but hey, shit happens in real life, it's only fair that shit happens in the stories as well... Pretty solid work, you've done a good job with the characters, especially Hanabi. Only issue I have is that it seems like Naruto isn't effected strongly enough by the situation. I mean, when Gaara 'died' he bawled his eyes out in front of everyone, and now his girlfriend of three years is dead, and he's barely shed a tear. I understand he's suppressing his emotions, but to do it THAT well...

Well damn. I can't tell if I approve or disapprove of that relationship, but it's damn cute to watch. Good work!

Cool story, though I usually don't like the ones where Hinata dies. Definitely something I'd like to read more of.

great story

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