Reviews for On the Way to Greatness |
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michalmil chapter 1 . 7/21 Great story, one of my favorite in all fan fiction. Will you continue it? |
LBII chapter 20 . 7/16 Very good. Here is hoping your muse will get you to pick up your story again SOON. Thank you very much. |
Guest chapter 20 . 7/14 i loved this story SO MUCH! Disappointed that it wasn’t finished but i thoroughly enjoyed reading. Thanks for writing this |
Hermione chapter 1 . 7/7 the books that JK Rowling made wer better |
Herald0fGojira chapter 14 . 7/6 I want to say that I love this story and would love to see it continue. One thing in this chapter that confuses me is Lucius going with them. It shouldn't matter how rich or well-connected he is, or how deeply Fudge is in his pocket. I don't get how he can just invite himself along on Harry's confidential, high security trip to view a prophecy, and I'm honestly surprised Harry didn't object. It's his appointment, I would think Harry's ought to be the final word on who goes with him. |
Hermione chapter 1 . 7/5 I like the original copy that JK Rowling made much better |
Hermione chapter 2 . 7/5 All JK Rowling's book's are better then your'es! |
lord of the east chapter 20 . 7/5 This is one superb fic |
Guest chapter 20 . 7/4 It's a crying shame you quit. Bravo though, for twenty terrific chapters. |
Guest chapter 19 . 7/4 Exciting stuff. I am going to miss this when I'm done. |
Guest chapter 18 . 7/3 Yikes! Dramatic and surprising. |
Guest chapter 17 . 7/3 I think it's a full year since he wanted to learn Occlumency, but he's too busy doing a hundred other important things. |
Guest chapter 16 . 7/3 Lol. Great understatement there by Albus, once the Elder wand is no longer his. Nice twists in this chapter. |
Guest chapter 14 . 7/2 Great battle depiction. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2 he didn't get the philosophers stone. why didn't he get it, or become seeker. he is not friends with Ron or Hermoine. i really didn't like this chapter. i think it is really bad. just because he is in Slytherin doesn't mean he doesn't have to do all the things he did in the book. |