Wow very well-written. A little bit over on the angst but I guess you are compensating for the lack of it in the books

Beautifully tragic portrayal of Dove. It would be awesome if you did an accompanying Sarai fic.

Sad, but maybe hopeful? At least a little bit...

Oh, this is lovely.

wow. I think you really got Dove, and I always love your titles. my favourites are 4, 5, 6, 7, 11, 12, 14.

13 is my absolute favourite. I love that last line of Fesgao's.

I think you got so much of Dove's inner voice- not the face of calmness and confidence she would have to show most of the time. great writing.

well written but dove is more confident than some of the points in here.

Excellent! I think you really captured Dove's character in this fic, all of the drabbles showed a different aspect to her. It was very well written, and very enjoyable.

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this is good...nobody ever looks at Dove's point of view on having to be queen! I also really like the format here.

I'm awed. Honestly. There's really so little I can say. But oh, oh, this made me ache. Dove is a queen through and through and yet her story will never, never be a happy one and even the god behind her power doesn't fully appreciate her.

I really liked this. You really got into the essence of Dove and revealed more and more about her. You detailed the ways she has changed since the rebellion and filled out the relationship between her and Sarai. Great oneshot.

I'm quite astounded by your writing talent, and I'm so glad I stumbled across your work. Not only is the prose eloquent and moving, but it flows very well. Of all the Tortall books, I didn't really take a great deal of interest in the goings-on of the Copper Isles, but this makes me want to take a closer look.

Thank you for sharing this. It was lovely to read.

I hope to see more from you :)

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Nice work! I liked the way you developed Dove's character and revealed her thoughts, layer by layer.

great job. I really like the ending.