I loved this. It was so sweet. Awwww!

Aw..cute story. Harry's a great father!:)

That was so adorable! I loved it.

Aw, so cute! I absolutely adore Lily! I love stories with her and Harry.

I did find one problem, though. Albus is a year younger than James, so that would make him 12 and not 11, because he's 2 years older than Lily. Other than that, this story was excellent!

Aw, how adorable. I adore ickle!Lily and daddy!Harry. And you did such a cute job here with them. :)

-honda

so sweet!

i loved it :)

- colouringcrayons

its a bit cute :)

Aw, that's so cute!

A pretty decent story :]

Actually, that's a lie, it's really sweet!

But one thing: You say Lily's 10 years old, but she acts much younger, more like a 6-year-old...

:\ I'm picky. Sorry.

Aww, this is very sweet! Poor Harry - his little, or not-so-little boys are leaving him, but his little girl will always be his little girl. Only one mistake I found. :)

His eyes turned up to meet the stunning (blue) ones that belonged to his daughter, Lily Luna Potter.

I'd always thought Lily's eyes would be brown, like Ginny's. :D Plus, I think in the Epilogue, that it said Albus was the only one who'd inherited Harry's green eyes, while James and Lily inherited their mum's brown eyes.

Otherwise, very cute oneshot! I'm surprised this has no reviews. :)

-toffeecakesxox.