Beautiful story T-T

It’s fine but it’s Not your best! I hate the fact the others interfere... it’s none of their business. Too many lemons so the quality of them isn’t great. Pity... I love your other fic where Sasuke is hokage, it’s awesome.

I'm 11 years too late but damn I love this story even though there are still so many questions lingering. Like how did Sasuke ended up being like a sex addict, manwhore, man who will fuck anyone with vagina? Why did he come up to propose to Sakura to be his FuBu? Is he fucking other girls while also fucking Sakura?*ugh disgusting* And why are the 5 of them living together?

I really don’t like how Sakura is in this story why does still keep fucking him then crying later when it’s obvious has commitment issues like don’t be a dummy and leave him be find some other dude till he sorts himself out you deserve better.

Oh the last scene was so beautifully written! My heart broke reading it!

You would think Sasuke will finally confess to Sakura in the kitchen xD

Dunno how I feel. The plot itself is quite good, so are the intimacy scenes and the angst. But the second this whole deal came about, I felt like I was watching a ridiculous soap opera. The angst started feeling forced and much of the actions happening seem overdramatic (Sasuke clutching his chest, Sakura childishly lashing out, Rookie 9 (all 21) dropping everything to "guard" them). It's also one thing for Kakashi to put them through tests to gauge their seriousness and to be protective of Sakura, and another thing for him to rope everyone in, forcibly "break them up," and act as overseers. Sure, Sasuke and Sakura's relationship and integrity should be questioned, but the proceedings feel a little childish for 21 year olds. All in all, first half was good, second was mediocre at best

I loved it! A good mix of angst, romance, and humor. Sasuke and Sakura are in character throughout which I always appreciate in a good story, though I'm always open to creative takes. I did not think the ending seemed rushed. I felt like it was a good place to stop before people demand sequels lol. I'm glad to have read this story when I did :) I find stories like these better than the YA novels in stores.

Hahahaha Sasuke and his indirect proposals. Great story, really!

*sniff*... so beautiful.. I knew he will shoot it out on someone that he loves her xd and poor Kakashi. Couldn't even say anything and they already started to fuck probably with him still staying in their apartment to hear them xdd

Ahahahahaha omg Sai! That image of him with black eye and smile on his face, that's just too much xDD

*highly confused from tears in her eyes and horny feeling in her lower part* WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME! xdd

This is ridiculous. They can't be deciding if they can be together or not lol. They are not kids anymore. And all rookie 9? Jeesus.. They should get their own lifes xd

Wow ok. They are 21 and Kakashi is telling them to break up xd I honestly don't even understand why they are all living together. Well I would maybe understand these young ones, but Kakashi too? xdd

Naruto The cockblocker xd