I actually searched up 'the answer to life, the universe and everything' and it was actually 42. I don't know why I'm so entertained by this fact but this chapter literally made my day! XD

I don't like the way you wrote the car crash scene. It wasn't supposed to happen the first day Edward gets back, and it just didn't seem well done to me. Connor's friends all ran away? How far and fast did they run? And just like that? It seems like Bella had more than enough time to move from where Connor would have been hit, since she watches him run away after helping him up, yet stupidly stands in his place for no reason whatsoever. You orchestrated this whole thing obviously so that Edward would save her, as well as have a clue that Bella's different since she knew what was coming ahead of time. It's too obvious, and too eager. I wish you had taken the time to ease into it, and write a better scene with smoother events. I also don't understand why she gets visions of people dying 24 hours before it happens. Why not whenever she touches someone? That would have been more interesting, making Bella isolate herself from contact with others. When touching Edward's hand by accident during their biology lab, that could have been a shock for her, to see nothing.

I don't understand why you did away with the biology class introduction during the phases of mitosis lab and went straight to Edward saving Bella from death.

I love Death-note! And I can see where you got the idea, and putting it into Twilight is a brilliant idea!
Now on to read the rest, I just know I'm going to like it!

This is like a love/hate relationship with this story right now because it is so good and I am not regretting reading it knowing it not finished, but i am so mad at myself for reading it too because it is so good.

I cant believe that you used that artist. Not many people i know know, know him or even his songs. It just makes me so happy.

im not sure billy would ever throw away that particular book as its probably sacred but I get that it works for your plot. I love this story so far

Dun Dun Duuuuun! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! What happens with Thomas next? How does his Da die? What great evil/thing is lurking in Alice's visions?
Thanks for an awesome story!
L

Favorite chapter

Belle histoire, originale. Dommage qu’elle ne soit pas terminée. Avez-vous pensez à la faire terminé par quelqu’un d’autre?

Lu avec Google Translate. French. Montréal, Québec.

(;-o)

(:-0)

(;-)

Départ intéressant!

Such a great story! I wished you would have expanded it. :( Thanks for sharing!

Please go back to writing this