If this is Conan's eventual death by the poison, how will Agasa and Haibara act?

Loved it.

Well that ended swell. Time for me to wipe up some tears

wow that was a emotional story

Salut JM

I really like this story. The depth of emotion and feeling is conveyed very well and your imagery is hauntingly beautiful. If there was one minor (extremely minor) criticism I had it would be that some of your sentences were a little muddled and hard to read. But the way you dealt with such a sensitive subject and the way you gave us some introspection into an often overlooked character were exceptional.

Oh my god... Conan's dead :(. I had been searching for a story like this for a long time, and now I feel empty now that I've read it. May Conan rest in peace.

Th-that was so beautiful! Very well written as well! I love how you described conan and kogoro's emotions. And the imagery too! Well done! Kudos (hahaha) to you!

My fav by far, I think I read it a million times over the years! And I still cry every single time, each time as though I'm reading it for the first time

Oh! My gawd! What happened to conan?! Why did he died? Why did he died? And this story is so touchy, that it touch my heart(not the literal meaning)
conan-kun... Is so... Kyaah! Why did you made him die?! Tell is why? Thats the big hole you made that made my jaw open. Please tell up why did he died?

Snif...no...No...NO! I refused to believe this! Conan, dead? No. ...though it is a good fic, it reminds me of the story The Little Match Girl

Wow... I... This was incredibly emotional. The descriptions of Conan's personality and of Kogorou's thoughts and feelings. I feel you really caught the essence of both characters, and that's a very hard thing to do. Wonderful work, truly an enjoyable read, despite how sad and painful it was!

kogoro knew conan was not well, but he just sat there.
he said that the boy might not wake up but he still acted surprised to find out he was dead?

the story was god but there was a lot of parts that contradicted with each other.
also i wished you touched on the issue of consn's illness. what happened to him, why was he alone, why was he sick, etc etc.

it would complete the over all story in my opinion and fill in the gaps

Very touching, moving. I had wondered if Conan was dying when Kogorou came to look for him. So heart-wrenching, yet very beautifully written. Nicely done! Jelp

I cried when reading this. I don't really enjoy tragedy but I love this one. So full of emotion. Great story

Oh this story, it was so heart wrenching. I quite literally cried, something I almost never do concerning stories. But this story... I really don't know what to say. Thank you.