Agh...so...much...love...can't...take it! lol

AAW! That was so sweet! I LOVED IT! And my fave part when cyborg says... Tone it down BB, or she's gonna blow us up next! Extrememly hilarious. Great job!

hehehehhe woo! fun- lol this is me guys- i'm going to put the disclaimer in in a few days, so don't sue me! grr! haha laterr...

-Carp!

Hasta la VISTA 2009!

SAVE THE CHICKENS CICI! RUN!

HAPPY NEW YEAR INDEED

i liked the FF very much XD. i hope u pop out great FFs like this :D FAV

That was a sweet story! I love it! HAPPY NEW YEARS!

THIS IS AWESOME!1

i LOVE it!

so much!

ah yay i was in it!

D

dude..well...de fic is cool...

but Robin was WAY OOC...i mean with de single tear n all...wayy too emotional...

n de truth or dare thing...de ques was..'are you in love with me, beastboy or robin?"

meanin any one of em...she cud hav jus said 'yes' rt? ritt?

i think u cud hav extended de ques...lik..."which one of us r u in luv with..me, beastboy or robin"

n de dialogues wer a bit confusin here n der...

n wat de hell is up with de dream robin has in de beginin?

n y is speedy mad...dat robin is in luv with starfire?dat he chose her ovr him?wtf dude?

im sry..but i jus had 2 ask ...jus 2 clear things up/..

but lik i said i likd de story n de plot altogethr...

jus a few technical difficulties...

Catch!~throws a dozen eggs to Carp~ Don't let Raven catch you! Ah! No fair, Raven! No powers allowed! Carp, throw it to Beastboy! Run, B! Run!

SAVE THE CHICKENS! Hahah! I have no idea that quote would affect you this way...It was just a sudden prompt! Hahah! Girl, I love you!

Ahww...you posted the story already! Whooh! Yey you! Umm...want some concrit?...Doesn't matter, I'm giving it anyway. Hahah...

When you write, put the description(actions, thoughts, etc.) after the dailogue. I mean you can put it before the dialogue but be sure not to put it right after another persons dialogue.*Carp raises an eyebrow...huh*

*sigh*... Let me put it this way... Instead of writing:

'“I couldn’t bear that. I just couldn’t.” She smiled and hugged, him, her voice teasing as she laughed.

“You are much to protective.” He sighed and backed away and she looked confused as he hung his head.'

You can write:

'“I couldn’t bear that. I just couldn’t.”

She smiled and hugged, him, her voice teasing as she laughed,“You are much to protective.”

He sighed and backed away and she looked confused as he hung his head.'

You can choose on either writing the desription stuff before or after the dialogue itself..or even both! Just be sure you don't confuse people by putting them at the wrong places...

This... gasp! is the. longest. review. I've ever...written! Hahah! Doesn't matter...I love you!

Happy New Year, dear friend. May GOD bless you!

PS...can I take this story as a birthday gift? Hahah...