this is awesome.

This is my favourite chapter and it managed to make me cry by the end. I really love Alphons, just why does he have to die in every book I read. It's pointlessly cruel

so that was both depressing and exciting! :'D

only one part left :'( and its abandon... damn...

if this was made into an anime, i would love it just as much as the real FMA honestly, its just so amazing!

pretty sure its taking me way longer to read this then it took me to watch all of the anime TBH, i can (and have) binged watched all of FMA/FMAB in two days each. this fic has taken me...what? about a week now? your fic is longer then the anime :'D

-ZeyTheFox-

..ok...so that was, like, the most dramatic thing ever :O ...holy shit.

i haven't read the summary or pairings for the last part :'D i didn't want any spoilers.. so i really have no ideas where this is going.

im glad 'hes' dead now (i won't say in case someone is reading this that hasn't finished it yet) but i loved the final battle with him and Roy, not only dramatic, but it felt like you really closed that part of the story with that fight between them.

soooo...ok...where are the brothers going to end up now? so curious!

-ZeyTheFox-

holy sh!t :O that was intense!

ok...so, Alphones is the one destroying the balance? because basically Ed came back and broke the deal (the deal being Ed gos to Earth for Als body) interesting development!

and YES! Ed got to beat the crap out of Kiehle :3

and now Thule is coming!?

dang that chapter was so amazing! :D

-ZeyTheFox-

i no longer feel i want RoyxEd from this fic, the bond between Ed and Alfons is just so strong...
yet, what will happen at the end? are you going to write off or kill Alfons because of the balance? i hope not! D;

i just love when you write the sweet/domestic parts with Ed and Alfons, they are so cute together 3

-ZeyTheFox-

aww, i was a little sad that the AlfonsxEd scene was so short xD i was hoping it was going to be really long and passionate after they were so long apart.

and yep! i knew that guy was a sleazball :/ if Ed finds out he is so going to kick the Brigadier General's ass :'D

and poor Roy, it sometimes seems like he's trying to take care of three little misbehaving kids xD

-ZeyTheFox-

my gowd...i love how you write Roy, he cares so much about them all, and is such a parental figure to Al.

i hate/love Carl R. K. he's such a meen and manipulative dude, i kinda hope he dies xD ... yet i love him as a bad guy and want him to keep tormenting the poor boys though too. and also DANG he's creepy! i assume that little interrupted non-con part between Alfons and Arkmen (forgive me if i spelled his name wrong) wasn't the only one? because Carl R. K. seem WAAAAYYYY to interested in the boys :/

-ZeyTheFox-

how long can they stay with Winry and Granny? the military will probably find them soon...

hmmm..do i want the military to find them though? im not sure :P i think it world be interesting regardless, lots of possibilitys of new plot while on the run, and yet i am very curious as to what the military will even do to Ed if they find him, so i guess im hoping they get found by the military.

(sorry Ed..but im secretly cheering for the other side xD)

-ZeyTheFox-

oh $h!t ;-; im almost half way done with this part... i feel like i could just keep reading this forever though...

each chapter takes about 1 hour exactly to read. last one taking one hour and two minutes, this one taking one hour and four minutes lol.
that meen i only have...about... seventeen more hour ;-;

...seventeen isn't long enough...

-ZeyTheFox-

all that plane action was awesome! i can totally see Ed hanging off a plane like that too xD he IS a little crazy after all..

and AH! they about to go and find Al now! :D

-ZeyTheFox-

hmmm..why is Ed being all distant and crabby? is it because he realizes he still loves Roy? or is it because now that Alfons isn't dying, Ed is worried what long-term effect its going to have on Alphones?

-ZeyTheFox-

dang...you got my heart going two ways here...

i read lots of different pairings, but RoyxEd is my fav though, YET...you have built this awesome relationship with Ed and Alfons...

but i do want Ed to be with Roy...

but i also want Ed to be with Alfons though too...

ahhh! your evil! xD i can't even pick!

-ZeyTheFox-

"Yeah, I wonder why he didn't want you to come here and bomb us for the sake of your armoured mutiny against your own country," Edward said dryly.
Pfft. Pure genius, that line is.

That was so sad. I loved this story so much!