What the actual fuck did reád just how?! I can't understand how can a story go this much out of plot...the only thing happening in this story is characters fucking each other. As I read the story ..I thought okay now it's going to improve and I thought that for up-to 3-4 chapters BUT no this is a huge mess...the summary is amazing the idea is cool BUT how can your characters be so underdeveloped and crazy and I don't know it's hard to explain. I hate this story...ruined my mood.

It feels as you haven't thought how to steer the story after you came up with a plot, and now the only thing you can do is let every character of yours to hook up with each other. It feels as if all of them are just in lust, not love. And they only love themselves.

Not sure if you are checking these still, but I wanted to tell you how much I am enjoying your writing! I love the plot twists, the character flaws, the love-misses. I liked the mystery POV chapter and the reveal a few later! So darn good. As luck (or just the right dates) would have it, I still have a little Thanksgiving break left to read. Thank you!

Im so immature ... but I find it kind of gross that Edward kissed Bella’s cheek after practically going down on Alice.

wow, this is my favorite story. ever. so so good! Did the sequel ever come out..?

I have read this story many times. I can deal with the majority of things but Edward/ Alice. That is a full no go. That is a big red line. I cringe just thinking about it. But i do enjoy this Edward/Bella angst. I have to be in a certain mood to read this.

Absolutely love this story. Please update.

I really tried to finish this. But this Alice... I can’t stand her. Worst Alice I’ve ever read. And a complete turn off. Sorry.

Bella is a lame bitch

4 years or 40, the pain of a broken heart remains.

jake was with rose...then tanya...then bryan….and now he loves rose? Ya ooooooooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkk

There are way too many people involved in this story, too many characters. And why are they all sleeping together, or have in the past. Its REALLY not normal to get around your group of friends this way.

Why is there so many povs? Does anyone really want an alice, rose, Emmett, or jake pov?

I love her...I didn't love her

I love him...I didn't love him

I tell everyone I love them….cause I don't really know what love is...oh and i'll fuck ANYONE

That should be the summary of this story

Jake was just with rose, the next day rose is with Emmett and jake is with tanya….and now hes saying that he loves bryan.

Ok, I cant read anymore of this fucking garbage. You do this with every fucking character. These people are supposed to be adults but you certainly dont have them acting like they are.

Im done