YAY BLOODY HELL! Great job!

Haha! I love that shark "on't give me that shit that men are stronger cos I'll bite you!" lol. RetsuXZaraki isn't one I would have thought of but its original XD

You should add a chapter where Kenpachi tries and make-up with Unohana. I don’t know where the pairing came from, but I would like to see more of it.

Very good. I like how realistic this story is. I can see all of this happening easily and I wonder if you will write another one. This was a very well written story and I enjoyed it.