Ok story

hillarious! who wouldnt want to walk in on edward?

I absolutly love this chapter! Bellas letter was a bit bittersweet, but I happen to think that the best letters are that way..

nice

Great Story, I can't wait for the sequel!

This is the first Twilight fan fiction I finished, mainly because you wrote a great story. I have started quite a few stories on this site and found them to be poorly written, but not yours. It was intelligent and interesting. I look forward to the next one.

That was so sad...I was practically crying it was that emotional! You did such a beautiful job in this last chapter in capturing Edward's emotions.

Oh, and that last line...It just sums up everything!

I cannot wait to see where you go with the sequel...I will. def. be waiting for it.

~Chel

Oh man, ending with a cliffie is just killing me. Love the story, so you just gotta do a sequel to let us know about Piper's trek and whether or not she and Edwards get together in the end

aww, i cant wait for you to update

Oh no! Cliff hanger! I really want to know what happens with Piper!

I love what you have done with this story! I really want to see what happens with Piper and Edward!

I'm really glad to see what happened with Edward and Bella!

Wow, I didn't think Bella was going to be so welcoming to Edward but I'm glad she did...and how she told him that HE needs to get over HER.

The girl made total sense...and she doesn't even know Piper!

"You could very well be the ones to put each other back together..." I adore that line...Edward and Piper are perfect together in my mind...

~Chel

This is the first time I have commented on this story and I just wanted to let you know I think it is very good. I love everything twilight. I was against Edward with anyone but Bella at first but I have come to love Piper and now that I have read chapter 18 its awesome. I actually live about 15 miles from Valdosta Ga and work there how ironic is that. Please keep up the good work.

MIssy

Poor Piper...and actually poor Edward too. They both have so much baggage. Obvioulsy very different kind of baggage, but its still there.

I hope that Edward doesn't run off again. I think Piper really needs him, and you know what? Edward really needs Piper.

Let me tell you..I have been so excited with all the new chapters. I was just thinking about whether you added another one and then came Chapter 20. Thank you:) I know how hard it is to consistently update a story.

That was so intense. There was so much going on in this chapter and I LOVED it all.

I mean, on the one hand, you had Edward finally giving in and showing Piper how he really feels about her...and then, he kind of went and messed things up again. Well, I don't think he was expecting Piper to tell him what she said right?

That was so sad...that she lost her child...in such an awful manner.

I would love to see this story from Piper's POV...because I think the emotion could be captured must better if we knew what she was actually feeling and thinking.

~Chel