Reviews for Tension
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 9/14/2017
Those Fangirls they were talking about? Yeah I'm totally one of them. But this was written in such a way that it made me giggle to high heaven!
Giu chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Hehe Nice oneshot xD
The Cake Genius chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
Lol, I ship all of these! :D
Miharu is Harukas Love Child chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
LOL! I loved the analysis of the other mangas' fanservice...pfft, especially the Naruto one...it just reminded me of how the author referred to it again later with the nine-tailed beast reminding Naruto that he'd had his first kiss with Sasuke XD XD XD. this was really good, thank you for writing!
Saelyna T chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Nice one! So sweet! And these hints to the other phenomenal mangas of Tsugumi Ohba and Takeshi Obata!
How right you are with these assumptions. It's not like Takagi and Mashiro are manga-characters any more but real persons. Some kind of people you easily want to join. Definitely to see what's really going on between THEM!
Oh, I'm such a fangirl... rofl
Great, thx for sharing!
Sora's Sanctuary chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Wow, just wow. The references you made in this is story is fantastic!
You write Shujin and Saiko as if you were the mangaka himself. Wait, I'm praising too much here xD Let's just say you write their characteristics very well. And LOL yeah, I kinda agree with Shujin, fangirls are the reason why even shounen manga goes to the top. I pretty much grinned when I saw the example between Gon and Killua coz man, that's soooo true! Anyway, yeah. I loved it all in all. Two thumbs up! Like all the other Bakuman fics I've read.
Uqluiorra12345 chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
LOL
LiahFaile chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
NICE!
Hahaha, I love the references to the other mangas. I found your story on the Bakuman community and this is seriously awesome! This is definitely a phenomenon those two would have noticed as mangakas.
Good job with it! :D
Eorendel chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Oh my, this is great!
SkyGem chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
ahaha XDD i loved it! awesome job!
things24 chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
I just adore this fanfic! I love the awkwardness and I totally thought that Akito should've put his foot in his mouth for saying "I like you" in the first few chapters. lol it sparked my love for this ship muwhahaha. I love the ending!
frustrated fireworks chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Nice story!

Keep writing! :D
Ash of Mine chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
That was so cute and funny! I think you manage to grasp the spirit of "Bakuman" by milking a manga cliché for all its worth!
skepsis66 chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Lol! Nice scenario .
Kolbie Ru-Ru chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Aww! This is sooooo cute! And I was laughing my ass off the whole time! Seriously, who couldn't laugh at a conversation like that? *gigglesnort*
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