Those two insecurity was so painful!

Though i personally think Usagi-san would let Misaki read his unpublished story.

But how i LOVE the conversation between Misaki and Nowaki that lead them reach clear view of their lover.

This is great!

nice OS, they really had much in common.

That was cute, but I wish you had added one more part about Nowaki and Hiroki at their house at the end. Just to add a little more love to their situation.

I think you areright friend havespecial spot in our heart but our lover held the entire soul

Aw how cute my fav couples are I love these couples the most!

Awwww so cute a jealous Misaki.

This was such an awesome story!

Loved it [

Aw, this made me feel all giddy and fuzzy inside. 8D I was bit surprised that Nowaki didn't figure out whom Misaki was talking about when he mentioned devil teacher, but..perhaps I just read wrong and misunderstood. It happens a lot when I'm fangirling over a story.. D; It's kind of annoying how Nakamura still won't let Egoist and Romantica couples meet each other despite some brief cameos, but fics like these are nice then. (:

Really liked this, thanks for sharing~

I liked this, but I want to know how Nowaki puts is own advice into action too. I know that I sound demanding, but reading this I really thought it needed more of Nowaki and Hiro-san at the end. That's my two cents worth. Well done!

Really good story;)

This is sweet :)

Wow, this felt like a chapter RIGHT OUT of the series. Your characterization is absolutely spot on. No words...

Aw. I love it :D

Really nice! I really enjoyed this. It was really cute and well thought out! Great job on your first fan fic and believe me your English is fine! That is the only language I know and you already write way better than me!

XD ha hah

Thank you for uploading and writing! Keep up the good work.

Aw, the story is so sweet ! The characterization is very well-respected, I particularly love Nowaki's character.

Thank you for this story