Reviews for The Bet |
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kayk806 chapter 27 . 2/27/2019 really good |
ClaceLover08 chapter 26 . 8/17/2018 i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & I'm happy that Bella & Edward are together |
BadBoySuprem Super-McSizzle chapter 21 . 11/7/2016 this story is amazing but ya know that u made too many spelling mistakes and some things were there which i found i dont like them such as Bella's hair being blonde and then died up to dark brown , i mean we all know that it was her natural hair colour and second that rosalie owns a red BMW not a Porsche ...though i dont like this things i thought maybe u tried to do something different ...but i cant deny it that i have to say that the story is great ...LOVE IT |
alemorganx chapter 27 . 5/7/2016 I liked it but I really hope u've improved your grammar |
Guest chapter 26 . 3/23/2016 It's "you're" not "your." "You're" is a combination of "you" and "are" and should be used an any scenario where "you are" could replace "you're" in a sentence. For example: You're a writer. "Your" is a possesive adjective that shows something belongs to the person being addressed (ie. Your car is red.) |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2014 bella IS A BRUNNETTTE NOT A FRIGGEN BLOND |
Irabella RobSten chapter 26 . 4/8/2013 Great story! :) |
vampiregirl31 chapter 27 . 11/4/2012 I LOVE YOUR STORY |
diehardtwilightfan23 chapter 27 . 9/12/2012 lol just finished this today and now excited to go find the sequel, loved it! |
Reina Rebelde chapter 27 . 7/6/2012 i hope this one when she looses her virginity Edward forgot to use a condom and bella gets pregnant |
Reina Rebelde chapter 26 . 7/6/2012 the story is amazing i love it from chapter to chapter like...wow :) excellent job |
bella's beta chapter 27 . 7/4/2012 I just loved this story. It was special. Cant wait to read the sequel! |
VampireSa5m1993 chapter 2 . 7/9/2011 idk if this is old news or not but i just found your story and as soon as i read the first chapter i was like ha its like the twilight version of she's all that which is one of my favorite movies from the 90's staring freddie prince jr and rachel leah cook ha i think i will enjoy this story and for the record some people are just really off you clearly said in ur a/n that Bella was blonde for a reason which if i m right i completely understand i swear some people just don't read the a/n i mean hello you answered the question b4 it was asked lol looking forward to reading the rest |
Kayanns chapter 26 . 2/10/2011 This was a REALLY good story but I wish they would've had sex. I also wish there was an epilogue too. |
PrincesaCullen chapter 4 . 1/11/2011 Emmet is so funny! |