| Reviews for Naruto: The heart that melts the ice |
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   Monster King chapter 13 . 11/3/2018 Great story please continue it soon |
| my 2 guys chapter 2 . 7/20/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| my 2 guys chapter 1 . 7/19/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| Insomniac-Gaara4488 chapter 13 . 8/11/2011 Great! When is the next installment comming out? |
| Lycan91 chapter 13 . 7/5/2011 awesome story. really hope that you update. i like this story and i really want to see wherte you go with it. Ja Ne! |
| LordChrom chapter 13 . 6/11/2011 awesome story. but is kushina alive or not, and whats up with narutos golden eyes. is all this going to be explained in the next chapter? |
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/1/2011 Is he going to be with hinata? He should. Kill that pink haired whore. |
| CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 9 . 8/30/2010 2 things, First off how could Lee channel chakra into his legs if he's unable to use chakra? Second in case you didn't know Shikamaru's mom's name is Yoshino. |
| Devilsummoner666 chapter 13 . 6/20/2010 update |
| naruto no juubi chapter 13 . 4/9/2010 its 2010 lready sohurry up withnew chapters okay okay |
| Fusion Alchemist chapter 13 . 12/27/2009 Awesome. Please update soon. |
| Knowledgeable one chapter 9 . 12/5/2009 Had it not been so late at night andpeople were watching, they wouldn't have seen more than a huge dust storm making its way through the village without any indication of what was causing it, with the one exception of a loud "YOSH!" that came from Lee at the challenge that was now presented to him. Kicking it into high gear the bowl haired boy pumped chakra into his legs until he was again neck andneck with Naruto. Read this carefully. Lee has no chakra. Lee can only use taijutsu. If you had watched any of the Anime or read any of the Manga then you would know this. Lee trains with sheer willpower powering his strength |
| Neokyuubi18 chapter 1 . 11/9/2009 You should fix the format. All the wording should be tothe left like how you have the introduction. Interesting story. |
| Whispers in your head chapter 1 . 10/26/2009 Well, I'd have to say, going by the first chapter, that your story hold a good deal of promise. I don't really think I've ever seen a story that starts post-timeskip where Haku is alive, and the premise is interesting. The spelling could use a bit of improving, but it looks more like you occasionally leave out a letter in a word, like when you wrote "H" instead of "He". You also occasionally switch from past to present tense, like in the last two paragraphs where everything is in the standard "he did this" and then switches to "he does this". Overall, minor errors in the mechanics of writing, but a good beginning to a promising story. I must say that I rather like it, and I look forward to the introductions of Haku and Ino. |
| Dude 45 chapter 1 . 10/22/2009 nice start. |
