Naruto is such a weak little bitch

Ugh garbage chapter 11. If he cant hide who he really is then screw everyone of you people that make story this bad.

I realize this is an old story and commenting on it now is useless but he owes them nothing and Tenten shouldn’t be sharing with basically an enemy. Naruto owes them nothing! Also he is Tentens superior, he has every right to order her to go get help and she should be disciplined for putting a knife to his throat.

Seems every time he uses the suit he is exhausted, it is happening too often for this story to be fun to read.

Hooo, okay. Fact-check time. Just...please. Check 'em.
"Infants don't use their brains much, so their (I'd have chosen "there") is very little chance of danger to the child's health..."

Ooooh, damn. Holy shiz! The American Medical Association is WAY more uptight than Konoha. Bit better on the research, too.
DON'T give babies weird shit. Just. Don't.
Why, you ask?

The first neural activity begins at only 5 weeks after conception.
Infants and young children use their brains FLAT OUT, while they are learning. It's the TRUE "springtime of youth", and your brain never gets such a rich opportunity again.
In the first few years of a child's life, there is an AVALANCHE in the development of neural pathways.
It's a CRITICAL time in the development of a child.

Sorry, but it's kind of a trigger for me. I work with teens with severe disabilities. Autism, Down's syndrome, Fetal Alcohol Syndrome (unforgivable, that one), etc...They shouldn't have to bear these burdens.

So...might go easy on that spice there, Muad'Dib. It can mess you up. (Of course, the "wierding way" could be a new spice-related ninja bloodline...but is it worth 100 vegetables for 1 prodigy?)

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Irrelevant sort-of apologetic explanation:

BTW, I take Adderall on days that I need it, as does my daughter, and FUNNY THING IS, we have ADD HYPOactive, NOT HYPERactive. (It's more common in girls, although one of my brothers has it as well, and under-diagnosed.) People just think you're lazy...hah!
It's a real thing. We are the Naras. (Well, my IQ is a kinda meh 130. They'd pity me. Not much of a Nara.) The one brother has an IQ of over 150...but he's never gonna live up to the promise of that.

I 1000% get needing some help, but it's best not to mess around with infant neural development.
Even then, it's the brain. With all of our knowledge, we're probably still in the "stone knives and bear skins" stages of understanding.

Wait...what? You say this is all pretend?
Never mind.

Well, I do like your story, on the whole.

Sarutobi mangled the crap out of that Sun Tzu quote - you know...the one that is supposed to go:

“If you know the enemy and know yourself, you need not fear the result of a hundred battles. If you know yourself but not the enemy, for every victory gained you will also suffer a defeat. If you know neither the enemy nor yourself, you will succumb in every battle.”

Dang man, look it up. Guess the city hidden in the leaves doesn't have the internet and Google.
So much for being "the professor". Maybe senility is creeping in.

Still, I do like your story, just gotta mentally edit it.
Rode-road, through-threw, wave-waive. English is insane. "I" before "E"... EXCEPT after "C"...Everything's a rule...unless it isn't. ArkanSAH. KanSASSS. No logic at all.
My brother lives in a 3 million dollar house, flies all over the world consulting, and is an officer for a huge bank in a very, very wealthy city. He can't spell for crap. He has people who do it FOR him.
You need a beta.

On to the next chapter! Woot! (BTW, waiting to see if Hinata loses her shiz...)

That story was awesome. And to have a chance to have a full relationship with tenten. Ah yeah i definitely approve.

Type your review FANFICTION

I love the 3rd hokage, so badass.

Weird does naruto have an armor or not? More or less while im reading this he got no armor. But the story is nice.

chapter 3 at the end I can't stop laughing the 3rd finally slew his enemy "paperwork" THEN HE SET IT ON FIRE Sat at his desk and said "let it Bern" he just went from grandpa to Boss

God dammmnnn this Naruto is fucking infuriating

I have not read a story as entertaining as this since. Fear Z Deadpool's. (Kami's Special Warrior) story good job keep it up

Kinda OBVIOUS how naruto got exposed isn't it? DANZO, come on IT'S SCREAMING IT!(wasn't exposed before, only since getting to suna, it is a KONOHA drug, there are konoha ninja there ILLEGALLY and TRYING TO DO TREASON!... Kinda SHOUTING IT WITH A NEON SIGN isn't it? CONSIDERING suna was on thin ice and HAD no allies within konoha, IT WAS ONLY DANZO that COULD have access to it, AT ALL!) Although how they don't KNOW this, is kinda just STUPID.. It is also REALLY stupid to watch the third make MORE EXCUSES for the OLD should-be DEAD MAN! Also MORE TIME UNCONSCIOUS? sigh.. I think I am done with this story!

I don't think naruto quite GRASPS the idea of "KEEP IT A SECRET!" Maybe it IS a good thing he wasn't told crap, he doesn't seem BRIGHT ENOUGH TO SHUT UP!